Question

7．Write at least 60 words with the topic"Growing Up"請(qǐng)你以"成長(zhǎng)"為題，寫(xiě)一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格．
提示：在每個(gè)人的成長(zhǎng)過(guò)程中，有些因素對(duì)人的成長(zhǎng)具有重要的作用．如，一樁事、一件物、一個(gè)人、一段經(jīng)歷、一次體驗(yàn)…．請(qǐng)你就其中的一個(gè)進(jìn)行描述，與大家分享．
要求：內(nèi)容切題、語(yǔ)句通順、意思連貫、字跡清楚．
（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分）
Growing up with my parents I consider my parents as the most important people in my life．This is not because they're wealthy or famous．Rather，what I value about most is the care and love they show to me．
My parents work hard，however，they're always there for me．Whenever I get into trouble and need a hand，they come over first to support me and encourage me（高分句型）．I grew up with their care and love．While they're getting older with grey hair，they never lose courge or effort in both life and jobs．（高分句型）．
With my parents'care and love，I am growing healthily and happily．From my parents，I have learned that one person can really make a difference．I'll never forget their care and love．I wish they could always be happy and healthy．．

Answer 1

分析 重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
1．the most important people in my life我一生中最重要的人
2．get into trouble 遇到麻煩
3．lose courge 喪生勇氣
高分句型：
1．Whenever I get into trouble and need a hand，they come over first to support me and encourage me．
無(wú)論什么時(shí)候我遇到麻煩或是需用幫助，他們總是首先站出來(lái)支持我，鼓勵(lì)我．（whenever引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，意思是"無(wú)論何時(shí)"）
2．While they're getting older with grey hair，they never lose courge or effort in both life and jobs．
他們?cè)谝惶焯炖先�，頭發(fā)也白了，但是他們從沒(méi)有丟掉對(duì)生活和工作的勇氣與努力．（while引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，意思是"當(dāng)…的時(shí)候"）

解答 Growing up with my parents  
    I consider my parents as the most important people in my life．This is not because they're wealthy or famous．Rather，what I value about most is the care and love they show to me．（成長(zhǎng)中最主要的人是父母）
    My parents work hard，however，they're always there for me．Whenever I get into trouble and need a hand，they come over first to support me and encourage me（高分句型）．I grew up with their care and love．While they're getting older with grey hair，they never lose courge or effort in both life and jobs．（高分句型）．（父母支持我，鼓勵(lì)我）
    With my parents'care and love，I am growing healthily and happily．From my parents，I have learned that one person can really make a difference．I'll never forget their care and love．I wish they could always be happy and healthy．（父母對(duì)我的影響）

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