Question

書面表達。（15分）
前些年，隨著工業(yè)的發(fā)展，南京的環(huán)境一度受到污染。但近年來，隨著人們環(huán)保意識的增強，城市的面貌煥然一新。請仔細觀察下面四幅圖，寫一篇有關(guān)南京城市變化的短文，可適當發(fā)揮，80詞左右。文章的開頭部分已給出。

Not many years ago, with the development of industry, the city of Nanjing was seriously polluted.
Not many years ago, with the development of industry, the city of Nanjing was seriously polluted.______________________________
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Answer 1

Not many years ago, with the development of industry, the city of Nanjing was seriously polluted. Heavy smoke and waste water from the factories made the air and river dirty. In the street, you can see litter here and theer. However, people have understood the importance of protecting our environment. They have planted many trees and the air is becoming fresh. You can see fish swimming in the clean rivers and birds flying among the trees. There are wide streets with green grass and beautiful flowers on both sides. The old city has taken on a new look.

試題分析：這是一篇圖畫作文，且是寫一篇有關(guān)南京城市變化的短文，所以要用第三人稱來寫。對于南京過去的情況，要用一般過去時，而對于南京的現(xiàn)狀要用現(xiàn)在的相關(guān)時態(tài)。對于圖畫類作文，必須要看懂圖畫。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。同時注意要求的字數(shù)不少于80詞，不要太多也不要太少。
點評：本文屬于圖畫類作文，動筆前，一定要認真分析圖畫，理解圖畫要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。