Question

【題目】寫作

假設(shè)你是大明，你的筆友給你來信了。請閱讀下面的來信，并寫一封回信。

要求：１.80詞左右；２.文中不要出現(xiàn)作者本人的真實信息。

Dear Daming, I’d like to tell you something about my “important gift”. It was a beautiful smile. When I was nine years old, I went to a new school. So no one knew who I was. I felt lonely. Then one day when I sat at my desk unhappily as usual, a girl walked to me and smiled. Though she said nothing, I felt the touch of something bright and friendly and it made me feel happy and warm. After that she became my good friend. As we all know, everybody may feel lonely or be in trouble. Could you tell me something about your “important gift” that touched you or changed your life? Yours, Susan

Dear Susan,

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Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Susan,

I am glad to read your letter and your“important gift” really touches me. As for me, my “important gift” was my mum’s sad tears. Two years ago, I became a “problem child”, and I was tired of everything. I did everything that was against my parents. That made my mum very sad, but she still loved me as usual.

One night, I lost my reason and broke a glass, which caused my mum to burst into tears. All at once, her sadness touched my deep heart. Since then, I have completely changed myself.

Best wishes,

Daming

【解析】

試題分析：給筆友寫一封回信，需要先讀懂來信的內(nèi)容，根據(jù)來信可知，回信要回答的是使自己感動的事情或改變生活的事情。因為敘述的是過去的事情，所以句子的主語應(yīng)該用一般過去時，要注意上下文的銜接。

寫作亮點：短文用了一些短語和句式，如：As for me, my “important gift” was my mum’s sad tears. Two years ago, I became a “problem child”, and I was tired of everything. I did everything that was against my parents. That made my mum very sad, but she still loved me as usual. One night, I lost my reason and broke a glass, which caused my mum to burst into tears.用了which引導(dǎo)的定語從句，增加了文章的亮點。