Question

請以“My hometown”為題，用英文寫一篇60詞的短文介紹自己的家鄉(xiāng)。要點如下：
1. 我的家鄉(xiāng)是一座美麗的現(xiàn)代化城市，在長江以南。
2. 安靜，空氣新鮮。到處有綠樹，鮮花，我們能聽到鳥叫，聞到花香。
3. 這兒的人很友好，他們樂于助人，
4. 今年將會有地鐵，既便宜又快捷。
5. 我的感受。
注意：我的感受用一兩句話來表達。
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Answer 1

My Hometown
My hometown is a beautiful city. It is south of the Yangtze River. It is quiet. The air is fresh. There are many green trees and flowers here. We can hear the birds singing and smell the flowers. People here are helpful and kind. There will be an underground this year. It will be cheap and fast. I like my hometown. I hope my hometown will be better.

試題分析：本文是一篇給材料的作文，讓學生寫的是關于自己家鄉(xiāng)的變化和美好的未來，所以這篇文章的時間有些跨度，需要學生會適時地使用不同的時態(tài)來表達短文的大意；要注意句子的主語的變化及主謂一致的問題。
【亮點說明】短文用了一些短語和句式，增加了文章的色彩如：It is south of the Yangtze River. We can hear the birds singing and smell the flowers. I hope my hometown will be better.等，這里用了連詞and和that，使句子結構更加復雜。