Question

【題目】假如你是張華，你推薦好朋友李明參加“最佳學(xué)生獎”的評選，請根據(jù)下面表格的內(nèi)容，寫一封推薦信。

個性	善良，樂于助人，……
能力	聰明，思維縝密；
事跡	1. 經(jīng)常參加一些為貧困兒童募集衣服、書本的活動； 2. 上個月，一個七歲的男孩迷路，他幫助孩子找到了家； 3. 上周末，他從大火中救出一位老人。 4. 領(lǐng)養(yǎng)流浪狗（homeless dog），每天放學(xué)后帶他散步，成為好朋友，幫他刷毛、洗澡、喂食；
希望	……

要求：語句通順，條理清楚，不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。字?jǐn)?shù)不少于80字。

Dear Sir/ Madam,

I would like to recommend my friend Li Ming for the Best Student Award.

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Yours faithfully

Zhang Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir/ Madam,

I would like to recommend Li Ming for the Best Student Award. He is the best student in Class 1, Grade 7. First and foremost，he is very kind and always ready to help others. Besides, he is so smart that he is good at all his subjects. Most importantly, he always tries his best to help those in need. He often take part in meaningful activities such as raising clothes and books. Last week, he saw a boy at the age of seven lose his way and helped him get back home. Yesterday he saved an old man out of fire and saved his life. He even adopts some homeless dogs , walks with them , cleans them and feeds them so that they soon become good friends. If Li Ming can win the award, we will be happy. We hope to hear from you soon.

Yours

Paul

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作，寫一封信。給出的材料比較全面，我們所要做的首先是應(yīng)用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。寫作前先結(jié)合要表達(dá)的事情確定句子的人稱時態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。注意寫作中的時態(tài)、人稱和數(shù)的問題，時態(tài)一般是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱是第一人稱較多。寫作中語言要準(zhǔn)確、簡明，說明有條理，符合邏輯。

寫作亮點：本文行文流暢，語言規(guī)范。推薦理由充分，有理有據(jù)，層次清晰，段落分明，使用了很多句型和短語： “First and foremost，Besides, Most importantly,”“ Besides, he is so smart that he is good at all his subjects.”以及復(fù)合句“He even adopts some homeless dogs , walks with them , cleans them and feeds them so that they soon become good friends.”的使用，豐富了文章的內(nèi)容，為文章增色不少。