Question

20．某中學正在招聘赴英夏令營領隊（tour leader），應聘的條件是用英語給你的隊友寫一封email，提醒相關注意事項．假如你是王涵，請根據(jù)要點提示，寫一封email，參加應聘．
要點提示：
1．出行前（提高了解相關信息、英語口語）；
2．旅行中（注意言談舉止、人身安全等）；
3．…
要求：
1．詞數(shù)：80詞左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
2．文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學校的名稱．
Dear friends，
I'm glad to be your tour leader，and I'm writing to tell you something important．
Before we go to England，we should learn about something useful，such as the weather，the interesting places．We should practice our spoken English，too．
When we're travelling in England，we must remember what we can't do．For example，we can't talk loudly on the planes，trains or buses．If you aren't allowed，you can't leave our team．
Finally，don't forget we are one team，so we must help each other．
If you still have any questions，please write to me．
Hope to see you soon!
Yours，
Wang Han．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
When we're travelling in England，we must remember what we can't do．當我們在英國旅行時，我們必須記住我們不能做的事．這是when引導的時間狀語從句，當…時候．
高分句型二
If you still have any questions，please write to me．如果您還有任何問題，請寫信給我．這是一個if引導的條件狀語從句，如果…．

解答 Dear friends，
I'm glad to be your tour leader，and I'm writing to tell you something important．
Before we go to England，we should learn about something useful，such as the weather，the interesting places．We should practice our spoken English，too．【要點一，出行前（提高了解相關信息、英語口語）】
When we're travelling in England，we must remember what we can't do【高分句型一，注意時間狀語從句的使用】．For example，we can't talk loudly on the planes，trains or buses．If you aren't allowed，you can't leave our team．【要點二，旅行中（注意言談舉止、人身安全等）】
Finally，don't forget we are one team，so we must help each other．【要點三，要互相幫助】
If you still have any questions，please write to me．【高分句型二，注意if引導的條件狀語從句的使用】
Hope to see you soon!
Yours，
Wang Han

點評 本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點，不可遺漏．需在平時積累相關的詞匯，寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關系．上下文之間可以適當使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．