Question

書面表達(dá)（共15分）
某調(diào)查組到社會(huì)上進(jìn)行調(diào)查環(huán)境污染的問(wèn)題，設(shè)計(jì)了下列調(diào)查表.。

kinds of pollution	There are many kinds of pollution around us such as _air   pollution, _water_     __ pollution, __noise/white__  pollution and rubbish pollution.
results	The environment on the _earth_ is becoming worse and _worse_ .

請(qǐng)你根據(jù)上面的調(diào)查表說(shuō)說(shuō)作為學(xué)生如何做好學(xué)校環(huán)境保護(hù)方面的工作。
注意：短文要求正確、流暢；詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右。（本小題15分）
提示詞：keep…clean and tidy,   clean(v.),   sweep,   throw rubbish into the dustbins, plant,  so that,  protect,  speak highly of(高度贊揚(yáng)),  make a contribution to doing(為……貢獻(xiàn))
(不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的學(xué)校名稱和姓名。)

Answer 1

Our school is our second home. It is our duty to keep it clean and tidy. Everyone can do something useful to improve the environment. First of all, I think it is necessary for us to clean the school yard every day. We must clean the windows and the doors. We also need to sweep the floor. Make sure everyone knows to throw rubbish into the dustbins. Those who do well in protecting the environment should be spoken highly of. Of course, a lot of trees and grass should be planted in our school so that our school looks greener. In a word, if every student makes a contribution to protecting the environment, our school will be much more beautiful.

解析試題分析：本題是圍繞保護(hù)環(huán)境展開敘述，首先應(yīng)該說(shuō)明保護(hù)環(huán)境的重要性，然后，分別敘述如何才能保護(hù)環(huán)境。最后，要發(fā)出倡議，號(hào)召大家要從小事做起為保護(hù)環(huán)境盡一份力。在寫作時(shí)，本文的主語(yǔ)可以用第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)一般應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。應(yīng)該盡量包括文中提示的內(nèi)容，可稍加拓展。
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