Question

【題目】書面表達

根據(jù)下表提示寫一篇題為“My pleasant trip to Beijing”的文章，不少于80詞。

	Main points(要點)	Details(細節(jié))
Place	Beijing
Time	last summer holiday
People	my parents and I
Experience	1)sightseeing(places of interest) (2)food/shopping	t the Palace Museum , Tian’anmen Square(biggest), the Great Wall(wonderful), Beijing Duck, Wangfujing Street
Feeling	excited, happy, tired	want to visit again

My Pleasant Trip to Beijing

Answer 1

【答案】

My pleasant trip in Beijing

Last summer holiday I went to Beijing with my parents. It took us about two hours to get there by air.Although the weather was hot, we spent three days there.

As soon as we arrived in Beijing, we went to Tian'anmen Square. It is the biggest square in the world.

The next day we visited the Palace Museum. On the third day we went to the Great Wall. It is wonderful.

We enjoyed the famous Beijing Duck. Mum did some shopping in Wangfujing Street. She bought some souvenirs for my cousins.

We were excited and happy although we were a little tired. I wish to visit here again one day.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇作文叫小作者介紹自己去北京的旅行，小作者首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。要求介紹。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。小作者還必須認(rèn)真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等。

寫作亮點：這篇短文不僅使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實。如 We enjoyed the famous Beijing Duck. Mum did some shopping in Wangfujing Street. She bought some souvenirs for my cousins. We were excited and happy although we were a little tired. I wish to visit here again one day. 等使文章的表達更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。