Question

9．1．作為一名中學(xué)生，在日常生活中應(yīng)該怎樣做才能保護(hù)我們的環(huán)境呢？請根據(jù)下面的提示已"How to protect our environment"為題寫一篇80字左右的短文．
（1）禁止亂扔垃圾．        
（2）盡量以步代車或騎自行車．
（3）節(jié)約用水、電．節(jié)省文具用品杜絕浪費(fèi)．
（4）應(yīng)該盡量使用可再利用杯、飯盒，這樣就可以大大減少垃圾的產(chǎn)生．
（5）要愛護(hù)花草樹木，并且積極參加植樹活動(dòng)．
How to protect our environment．
As a student，what can we do to protect our environment？Well，we can't throw rubbish here and there．If possible，we should walk or ride a bike instead of taking a taxi or a car，because cars and taxis make a lot of pollution．Don't waste water or electricity and try to use fewer school things．Always use reusable cups，lunch boxes so that we can reduce waste．Also，we should care for flowers and trees and take an active part in planting trees．I believe if everyone protects our environment，it will because better．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是以"How to protect our environment"為題談?wù)勗谌粘Ｉ�活中�?yīng)該怎樣做才能保護(hù)我們的環(huán)境．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
（1）禁止亂扔垃圾．        
（2）盡量以步代車或騎自行車．
（3）節(jié)約用水、電．節(jié)省文具用品杜絕浪費(fèi)．
（4）應(yīng)該盡量使用可再利用杯、飯盒，這樣就可以大大減少垃圾的產(chǎn)生．
（5）要愛護(hù)花草樹木，并且積極參加植樹活動(dòng)．
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
instead of 而不是
try to do sth 盡力做某事
care for 照顧
take part in 參加
【高分句型】
1．①If possible，we should walk or ride a bike②instead of taking a taxi or a car，③because cars and taxis make a lot of pollution．
①if possible如果可能的話，是省略句，完整表達(dá)是if it is possible．
②instead of 而不是
③because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句．
2．Always use reusable cups，lunch boxes so that we can reduce waste．
so that引導(dǎo)的目的狀語從句．

解答 As a student，what can we do to protect our environment？Well，we can't throw rubbish here and there．（禁止亂扔垃圾）If possible，we should walk or ride a bike instead of taking a taxi or a car，because cars and taxis make a lot of pollution．（盡量以步代車或騎自行車）【高分句型】Don't waste water or electricity and try to use fewer school things（節(jié)約用水、電．節(jié)省文具用品杜絕浪費(fèi)）．Always use reusable cups，lunch boxes so that we can reduce waste．（應(yīng)該盡量使用可再利用杯、飯盒，這樣就可以大大減少垃圾的產(chǎn)生）【高分句型】Also，we should care for flowers and trees and take an active part in planting trees．（要愛護(hù)花草樹木，并且積極參加植樹活動(dòng)）I believe if everyone protects our environment，it will because better．

點(diǎn)評 以提綱提供情景的作文．要注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語法規(guī)則的正確性，就不會(huì)造成審題不清而偏離主題，但要注意，文章必須覆蓋所提供的各個(gè)提綱的要點(diǎn)．行文間要注意簡化描述，用簡短的語句代替冗長的語句．在作文完成的時(shí)候，應(yīng)該檢查、修改，以免遺漏一些需要表達(dá)清楚的要點(diǎn)和細(xì)節(jié)．