Question

6．假如你是Li Lei，下面是一封你的筆友Maria 給你發(fā)來的e-mail，請你根據e-mail 的內容給她寫一封回信，與她交流看法，并幫她排憂解難．
提示詞語：listen to，mother's love，care about，communicate with，get along with，smile
寫作要求：
（1）語句通順，書寫工整；
（2）可用所給提示詞語，也可以適當發(fā)揮；
（3）詞數在60-80詞左右
Dear Li Lei，
I'm afraid I've got a big problem recently．My mother talks too much to me．She always tells me，"Be careful while crossing the street．""Put on more clothes．""Did you do a good job at school？"and so on．I'm annoyed（煩惱）．What shall I do？
Yours，
Maria
Dear Maria
As a teenager，I met the same problem as you．But now I can get along better with my mother．Here are some ideas for you．
Your mother talks much，because she cares about you．Maybe it's not a good way，but it shows your mother's love．So I think you should listen to her．If your opinions are different from your mother's，you can communicate with her，and tell her what you are thinking about．
If your mother doesn't take your advice，just keep silent and give her a smile．
Yours
Li Lei．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
Your mother talks much，because she cares about you你媽媽說那么多，因為她在乎你，
because引導的原因狀語從句．
【高分句型二】
If your mother doesn't take your advice，just keep silent and give her a smile如果你的媽媽不同意你的建議，保持沉默，微笑．
if引導的條件狀語從句，

解答 Dear Maria，
As a teenager，I met the same problem as you．But now I can get along better with my mother．（交流感受）Here are some ideas for you．
Your mother talks much，because she cares about you．【高分句型一】Maybe it's not a good way，but it shows your mother's love．So I think you should listen to her．If your opinions are different from your mother's，you can communicate with her，and tell her what you are thinking about．If your mother doesn't take your advice，just keep silent and give her a smile．【高分句型二】（建議）
Yours
Li Lei

點評 本題給出的材料較為簡略，可發(fā)揮的空間較大，所以自己可以選擇自己比較熟悉的內容發(fā)揮，利用自己熟悉的單詞句式等．