Question

上周日是母親節(jié)。假定你是李華，請給你的美國筆友John寫一封信，談?wù)勀闶侨绾闻c母親一起度過這個特別的日子的。要點如下：
表述你與母親之間的情感；當(dāng)天你為母親所做的事情；母親與你當(dāng)時的心情、想法等等。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)80—100；
2. 請不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3. 郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。
Dear John,
It was Mother’s Day last Sunday. It was a special day, wasn’t it ?___________________________________________________________________________
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What did you do on Mother’s Day? I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear John,
It was Mother’s Day last Sunday. It was a special day, wasn’t it ?
Mother ‘s love is great ,she always gives us but never wants to get anything in return . My mother looks after me as well as she can. I love my mother.
On that day ,I got up earlier than usual. A fter washing ,I went to the kitchen and prepared breakfast.after that ,I put a nice card beside it.Then,I went to school before mom got up . I wanted to give her a special gift-a nice breakfast.I made the card myself,which said," I wish you health,mom! I love you very much!" When I came back from school later that day ,mom was waiting for me .with a smile ,she said,"dear,thank you for your wonderful gift.I like it so much!" We both smile happily. We can feel the deep love between us.
What did you do on Mother’s Day? I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。要求介紹如何與母親一起度過母親節(jié)。敘述過去的事情所以用過去時態(tài)。主要以第一人稱為主。
【亮點說明】這篇短文能條理的敘述所有的要點。語言流暢，句式豐富，如she always gives us but never wants to get anything in return ,A fter washing ,Then,等，這使文章更有條理。