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13．假如你正在接受一家英文報(bào)紙的約稿，以"How to be a good young man？"為話題．根據(jù)提示要求及圖片，并發(fā)揮自己的想象，準(zhǔn)備一篇80字左右的英文搞． （ 文章的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）
在學(xué)校：學(xué)生應(yīng)該守時(shí)、誠信、禮貌待人，遵守學(xué)校規(guī)章…
在家里：幫著父母做一些力所能及的事，關(guān)心、理解父母…
在社會(huì)：做一個(gè)城市志愿者，多參加慈善活動(dòng)…

Well，to be a good child，I think…I think we should have good habits．We should go to school on time and follow the school rules，we need ro get ready for our lessons before class and always listen carefully in class，It's good to study in groups and help each other．At home，we should do more housework and care about our parents．We should do morevolunteers in our free time．I hope all these wiil be helpful to you．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
 I think we should have good habits．我認(rèn)為我們應(yīng)該有好習(xí)慣．這是一個(gè)賓語從句，I think 是主句，后面的是賓語從句．
高分句型二
We should go to school on time and follow the school rules．我們應(yīng)該按時(shí)上學(xué)，遵守學(xué)校規(guī)章制度．should應(yīng)該，后跟動(dòng)詞原形．

解答 How to be a good young man？
Well，to be a good child，I think we should have good habits【高分句型一，注意賓語從句的使用】【開頭點(diǎn)明主題】．We should go to school on time and follow the school rules，【高分句型二，注意should的使用】we need to get ready for our lessons before class and always listen carefully in class，It's good to  study in groups and help each other．At home，we should do more housework and care about our parents．We should do more volunteers in our free time．【正文部分詳細(xì)介紹如何做一個(gè)優(yōu)秀的年輕人】I hope all these wiil be helpful to you．【結(jié)尾緊扣主題】

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點(diǎn)，不可遺漏．需在平時(shí)積累相關(guān)的詞匯，寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系．上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．