Question

14．學校英語園地將舉辦"校園節(jié)約，從我做起"的主題征文活動．請你針對校園浪費情況，結合以下短語，適當發(fā)揮，以班級名義寫一份倡議書．
What we often see in our school：
•leave the taps （水龍頭） on after cleaning hands
•leave the lights on when leaving
•food left on the tables after meals
注意：
1．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱．
2．語言通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范．
3．詞數(shù)80左右，文章的開頭已經給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear schoolmates，
We are sorry to see so much waste in our school．We studentsoften leave the taps on after cleaning our hands，and leave lights on when weleave．At the dining hall，we can see food left on the tables after meals．
It's time for us to change now．We should notwaste any of our food．We should eat up all the food．We should not order thefood more than we can eat while dining out，because many people in the worlddon't have enough to eat．At the same time，I think we should save water andelectricity．We should make good use of our school things．Let's try to make agood habit and save things around us．Let's do it from now on．
Class 1，Grade 9．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內容是針對校園浪費情況，以班級名義寫一份倡議書．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
一，浪費現(xiàn)象：1洗手后不關水龍頭．2離開后燈是開著的．3．飯后食物留在餐桌上．
二，我的建議．
常用到的重點短語：
eat up 吃光
at the same time 同時
make good use of 充分利用
from now on從現(xiàn)在開始
【高分句型】
1．We should not order the food①more than we can eat②while dining out，③because many people in the world don't have enough to eat．
①比較級的運用．
②while dining out省略句，完整表達while we are dining out．
③because引導的原因狀語從句．
2．①Let's ②try to make a good habit and save things③around us．
①let sb do sth 讓某人做某事
②try to do sth盡力做某事
③介詞短語做后置定語，修飾前面的things．

解答 Dear schoolmates，
We are sorry to see so much waste in our school． We students often leave the taps on after cleaning our hands，and leave lights on when weleave．At the dining hall，we can see food left on the tables after meals．（浪費現(xiàn)象）
   It's time for us to change now．We should not waste any of our food．We should eat up all the food．We should not order the food more than we can eat while dining out，because many people in the world don't have enough to eat．【高分句型】At the same time，I think we should save water and electricity．We should make good use of our school things．Let's try to make a good habit and save things around us．【高分句型】Let's do it from now on．（我的建議和號召）
                                                             Class 1，Grade 9

點評 本文是一篇給材料作文，短文的開頭已經給出．寫作時先要圍繞這些要點組織材料，確定寫作內容，注意將這些要點全部表達出來，并且要有適當?shù)陌l(fā)揮，在談到自己的觀點時，要結合活動內容，寫出自己的觀點．