Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)
“保護(hù)環(huán)境，人人有責(zé)”，你想成為綠色使者嗎?請(qǐng)行動(dòng)起來(lái)吧！其實(shí)，環(huán)保就在我們身邊，例如，拒絕一次性紙杯，隨手關(guān)掉電燈，使用布做的購(gòu)物袋，盡量騎自行車出行……請(qǐng)以“How to Be a Greener Person”為題，寫(xiě)一篇有關(guān)環(huán)保的短文，并適當(dāng)發(fā)表你的看法。（80詞左右）

Answer 1

How to Be a Greener Person
It’s our duty to protect the environment around us. The three Rs—reduce, reuse and recycle—are important. I think we’d better not buy bottles or boxes which people can only use once. We should turn off the lights when we are not using them. We can give old clothes to others to reuse them. When we go shopping, we’d better take a cloth bag rather than use plastic bags. We shouldn’t throw things away if they can be reused, repaired or recycled. It’s important for us to protect animals and plants. We are supposed to prevent the factory from pouring waste water into rivers, lakes and so on. If everyone is doing that, our world will become more and more beautiful.

試題分析：環(huán)境保護(hù)的文體是中考�？嫉闹黝}，對(duì)于本文的寫(xiě)作學(xué)生首先開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山指出保護(hù)環(huán)境是非常重要的，是我們的責(zé)任，可以利用it作為形式主語(yǔ)的句式來(lái)展開(kāi)；然后，對(duì)環(huán)境保護(hù)應(yīng)該如何做進(jìn)行闡述如拒絕一次性紙杯，隨手關(guān)掉電燈，使用布做的購(gòu)物袋，盡量騎自行車出行，保護(hù)動(dòng)植物，防止工廠的排污等，從這幾方面進(jìn)行展開(kāi)論述。句式上可以使用we’d better，It’s important for us to，We are supposed to等來(lái)闡述所寫(xiě)的內(nèi)容。最后，一句話進(jìn)行總結(jié)，說(shuō)明如果這樣做世界將會(huì)變得更美m(xù)ore and more beautiful。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文難度不大，寫(xiě)作條理性要把握好，對(duì)于要做的幾件事情，寫(xiě)的過(guò)程中通過(guò)變換句式和用詞上來(lái)提高語(yǔ)言的美度。在一件事情寫(xiě)完后要用上表關(guān)系的連接詞，或平時(shí)積累的各類表遞進(jìn)、并列的連詞來(lái)是文章富于活力。在平時(shí)的練習(xí)中要多去背誦范文，對(duì)表達(dá)好的句子，短語(yǔ)要進(jìn)行積累，并默寫(xiě)，考試前再集中看一下，這樣做到有備無(wú)患。