Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

提示：假如，Simon Li， 8年級(jí)的學(xué)生。上周聽了一個(gè)動(dòng)物協(xié)會(huì)主席的有關(guān)動(dòng)物的報(bào)告，決定申請(qǐng)加入動(dòng)物保護(hù)協(xié)會(huì)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示，寫一份80左右的申請(qǐng)信。

1. 自我介紹，8年級(jí)的學(xué)生，各門功課都很優(yōu)秀。喜歡各類動(dòng)物。

2. 加入理由：人類不斷地砍伐樹木, 再加上獵人的捕殺，結(jié)果，動(dòng)物的生存空間越來(lái)越少，動(dòng)物數(shù)量變得越來(lái)越少。希望能為保護(hù)動(dòng)物做些事情。

3. 假如能加入俱樂(lè)部，將非常高興。

4. 聯(lián)系方式：電話：63908 電子郵件：Simon LI@sina.com.

5. 開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總數(shù)。

Dear Chairperson，

I listened to your talk about animals last week. Now I’m writing to you I’d like to join the Animal Protection First, let me

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Look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours Sincerely

Simon Li

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Chairperson，

I listened to your talk about animals last week. Now I’m writing to you . I’d like to join the Animal Protection Society.

First, let me introduce myself. I’m Simon Li. I’m good at all the subjects and I like all kinds of animals.

People keep cutting down forests. Moreover, hunters kill them. As a result, they have fewer and fewer living areas (less and less living space).Their number is getting smaller and smaller. Animal are in danger now. I hope to act to help them.

I’ll be very happy if I can be a member of the club. You can call me on 63908 or email me at Simon LI@sina.com.

Looking forward to hearing from you soon！

Yours Sincerely,

Simon Li

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無(wú)拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇文章語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，詞匯及時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，能夠把提示的內(nèi)容敘述清楚，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫是一篇不錯(cuò)的文章。