Question

11．為了使同學(xué)們?cè)谛�園內(nèi)能更加健康快樂(lè)地成長(zhǎng)，學(xué)校決定向同學(xué)們征求建議．假如你是劉波，用英語(yǔ)向校長(zhǎng)寫(xiě)一篇80個(gè)詞左右的建議信．開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
注意：1、文中應(yīng)包含所給要點(diǎn)，并提出自己的建議，不少于三點(diǎn)；
2、不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和姓名；
3、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范，卷面整潔．
Dear Headmaster，
  I'm very glad to write a letter to you．These days we are talking about how to have a better school life．Here are some of my suggestions．First，I hope our school willopen the library more often．Second，I thinkour school can organize more after-class activities． Next I hope our school will give us more time for sports，art and music．And I suggest our school should organize fewer exams as well．
As for our teachers，I hope they will be our friends and make classes more interesting． And if they can talk less but more clearly in class，wewill be more interested in studying and have more time to practice．What's more，I hope they will give us less homework and finish classes on time．
Hope my suggestions will be helpful．Thanks for reading my letter!
                                                               Yours sincerely，
                                                                    Liu Bo．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容提出一些為了使同學(xué)們更加健康快樂(lè)地成長(zhǎng)的建議，給校長(zhǎng)寫(xiě)一封信，注意信件的格式．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫(xiě)作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1學(xué)校（1）經(jīng)常開(kāi)放圖書(shū)館（2）組織更多的課后活動(dòng)…
2老師：（1）讓課堂有趣；（2）課上說(shuō)的少且清晰…
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
make+sth+adj讓某物怎樣
be interested in 感興趣
what's more 再者
on time 準(zhǔn)時(shí)
【高分句型】
1．And I suggest①our school should organize fewer exams②as well．
①suggest后是省略了引導(dǎo)詞that的賓語(yǔ)從句．
②as well 也，放句末．
2．And①if they can talk less but more clearly in class，we will②be more interested in studying and have more time③to practice．
①if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句，遵循主將從現(xiàn)的規(guī)則．
②be interested in 感興趣
③動(dòng)詞不定式做目的狀語(yǔ)．
3．①What's more，I hope ②they will give us less homework and finish classes on time．
①what's more 再者
②hope后是省略了引導(dǎo)詞that的賓語(yǔ)從句．on time 準(zhǔn)時(shí)

解答 Dear Headmaster，
     I'm very glad to write a letter to you．These days we are talking about how to have a better school life．Here are some of my suggestions．First，I hope our school will open the library more often．（經(jīng)常開(kāi)放圖書(shū)館）Second，I think our school can organize more after-class activities．（組織更多的課后活動(dòng)） Next I hope our school will give us more time for sports，art and music．（更多的時(shí)間運(yùn)動(dòng)）And I suggest our school should organize fewer exams as well．（考試少一點(diǎn)）【高分句型】
As for our teachers，I hope they will be our friends and make classes more interesting．（讓課堂有趣） And if they can talk less but more clearly in class，we will be more interested in studying and have more time to practice．【高分句型】（課上說(shuō)的少且清晰）What's more，I hope they will give us less homework and finish classes on time．【高分句型】（準(zhǔn)時(shí)下課；家庭作業(yè)少一點(diǎn)）
Hope my suggestions will be helpful．Thanks for reading my letter!
                                                                                                             
Yours sincerely，
   Liu Bo．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇應(yīng)用文，注意信件的格式，主要是提出建議，注意表達(dá)的委婉性，考生在平時(shí)的英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)中需牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理，也可為文章增色不少