Question

日常生活中，中學生應當具有基本的自我保護能力。為了進一步增強中學生的安全意識，提高學習生活自我保護能力，某校開展了以“安全”為主題的英語演講比賽。請你根據(jù)以上目的和以下要點寫一篇演講稿。標題是：How to keep safe.
注意：1）內容必須包括所給的全部要點，可適當發(fā)揮；
2）表達清楚，語句通順，書寫規(guī)范，130詞左右。

Answer 1

As teenagers, we should always keep safe in mind. But how can we keep safe? Here are some of my suggestions. First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially on line. Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Also, we ought to eat healthily and safely. Eating food that goes bad will do harm to our health. Last but not least. Summer is coming, and we must remember it’s dangerous to swim in the river. In short, safety must come first!

試題分析：本題目要求學生以安全為話題寫一篇演講稿。所給要點比較詳細。在寫作前，可以先翻譯這些要點，然后再考慮將這些要點有條理的組合在一起，構成篇章，當然在寫作中我們也可以適當發(fā)揮，但所給要點一個也不能少。
【亮點說明】本文使用了一些表示順序的詞如first，second等，使得文章顯得很條理。還是用了一些副詞如especially、also等及句型so that，這些都為文章增色不少。