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4．隨著"爸爸去哪兒？"等綜藝節(jié)目的播出，人們越來越意識到爸爸對孩子成長的重要作用．根據(jù)近期你校對本校學(xué)生的調(diào)查，統(tǒng)計出孩子心目中好爸爸的三大優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)．請你根據(jù)下列表格中的內(nèi)容，以"What makes a good father？"為題，用英文寫一篇短文．

好爸爸的品質(zhì)	百分比	理    由
1．多花時間陪孩子	52%	感受到父愛．
2．以身作則	27%	為孩子樹立表率，教會他們誠實、勇敢．
3．經(jīng)常贊美孩子	14%	給孩子的一個微笑也是對孩子的贊賞．
請給出2條你認(rèn)為好爸爸應(yīng)具有的其他品質(zhì)，并加以說明．

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What makes a good father？
With the hot Chinese reality show"Where Are We Going，Dad？"broadcast，people realize that fathers play an important role in the growth of their children．From the recent survey of our students，we have found that there are three most important qualities that a good father should have．
52% of the students think a good father should spend more time with his children．In this way they'll feel their father'slove.27% of the students believe a good father is a good example．He can teach his children to be honest and braver.14% of the students thinka good father should often praise his childrenbecause hissmiles also suggesthispraise．
In my opinion，a good father is also a patient teacher．A good father will listen to his children and give them suggestions if necessary．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
14% of the students think a good father should often praise his children because his smiles also show his praise．
句中"a good father should often praise his children"為賓語從句，"because his smiles also show his praise"為原因狀語從句．這句話意為：14%的學(xué)生認(rèn)為一個好爸爸應(yīng)該經(jīng)常表揚(yáng)他的孩子，因為他的微笑也是一種贊賞．
高分句型二：
In my opinion，a good father is not only a patient teacher but also a good friend．
句中使用短語有"in one's opinion 依某人的觀點"、"not only…but also…不僅…而且…"．這句話意為：依我看來，好爸爸不僅是一位耐心的老師還應(yīng)該是一個好朋友．

解答 What makes a good father？
With the hot Chinese reality show"Where Are We Going，Dad？"broadcast，people realize that fathers play an important role in the growth of their children．From the recent survey of our students，we have found that there are three most important qualities that a good father should have．（開篇點題）
52% of the students think a good father should spend more time with his children．In this way they'll feel their father's love.27% of the students believe a good father is a good example．He can teach his children to be honest and brave.14% of the students think a good father should often praise his children because his smiles also show his praise．【高分句型一】（調(diào)查結(jié)果）
In my opinion，a good father is not only a patient teacher but also a good friend．【高分句型二】He will listen to his children and give them suggestions if it is necessary．（我的觀點）

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