Question

4．一首"Where is the time？"又一次引發(fā)了人們對時間的感慨，作為即將參加中考的你，將怎樣充分利用時間，為初中三年畫上一個圓滿的句號．請從以下幾個方面，以"Treasure every minute"為題，寫一篇不少于80詞的短文．（文章里不能出現(xiàn)真實校名和人名）
（1）時間的重要性          （2）你身邊浪費時間的現(xiàn)象
（3）你的時間去哪兒了   （4）你將怎樣充分利用余下的時間？

Treasure every minute
People often say，"Time is money，"But in fact time is more valuable than money．If money is spent，we can earn it back．However，if time is lost，it will never return．This is the reason why we must value time．The time we have is limited．But there are a lot of people who do not know the importance of time．They spend their time chatting，smoking or drinking．They do not realize that wasting time is simply wasting their valuable life．As for me，I spend most of my time doing homework．In a word，every minute is precious，we should make full use of our time．Do not leave what can be done today to tomorrow．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
But there are a lot of people who do not know the importance of time但是有些人不知道時間的重要性．
who是關系詞的定語從句，修飾people．
【高分句型二】
They do not realize that wasting time is simply wasting their valuable life他們沒有意識到浪費時間就是浪費他們的寶貴的生命．
that引導的賓語從句，作為realize的賓語．

解答 People often say，"Time is money，"But in fact time is more valuable than money．If money is spent，we can earn it back．However，if time is lost，it will never return．This is the reason why we must value time．The time we have is limited．（時間的重要性  ）But there are a lot of people who do not know the importance of time【高分句型一】．They spend their time chatting，smoking or drinking．They do not realize that wasting time is simply wasting their valuable life．【高分句型二】（身邊浪費時間的現(xiàn)象）As for me，I spend most of my time doing homework（你的時間去哪兒了）．In a word，every minute is precious，we should make full use of our time．Do not leave what can be done today to tomorrow．（你將怎樣充分利用余下的時間）

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