Question

假設(shè)你是Peter，你的同學(xué)Mike經(jīng)常在教室里隨地丟紙片、塑料袋等；他還避開父母和老師抽煙。作為同學(xué)， 你將如何勸說他改掉不良的習(xí)慣？請(qǐng)你給他寫一封信。

要求:1. 用上所有提示，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；      2. 語言正確，行文流暢，書寫規(guī)范；

3．詞數(shù)：80左右。信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出；4．文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及校名。

Dear Mike,

As your classmates and one of your best friends,                                      

                                                                              

                                                                              

                                                                              

                                                                              

Yours,

Peter

 

Answer 1

【答案】

As your classmates and one of your best friends, I’d like to give you some advice. I find you often drop some paper, plastic bags and other litter in the classroom. These things make the classroom dirty. Don’t you think it is our duty to keep the classroom clean? So could you please not drop litter in the classroom anymore? And another thing is that you often smoke. Smoking is bad for your health. Would you mind stopping smoking? I hope you can get over these bad habits and be a good student.

Yours,

Peter

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作，寫一封信勸說你的同學(xué)改掉不良習(xí)慣。本題給出的材料較為簡(jiǎn)略，動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)先認(rèn)真閱讀材料，圍繞所給材料組織內(nèi)容，確定主要短語，句式等問題。通過閱讀材料可知這篇短文主要使用的人稱就是第一二人稱，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，這方面需要注意的問題比較少。動(dòng)筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱，寫出關(guān)鍵單詞。寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。

考點(diǎn)：應(yīng)用文寫作

點(diǎn)評(píng)：做英語書面表達(dá)時(shí)，要注意認(rèn)真審題，分析體裁，確定時(shí)態(tài)；分析內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞。最后，注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯(cuò)誤。