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書面表達(dá)（本題共20分）
假如你班要就“如何為中考作準(zhǔn)備”開一個主題班會，請你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容寫一篇發(fā)言稿，談?wù)勀銓χ锌紲?zhǔn)備過程中要注意的事項(xiàng)以及建議理由：
1. 保持良好情緒。不要焦慮和緊張，否則會沒有面對困難的勇氣。
2. 制定合適的目標(biāo)，太低的目標(biāo)使人懶散，太高的目標(biāo)使人失去信心。
3. 不要熬夜，以確保上課時精力旺盛，注意力集中。
4. 多與父母、老師、同學(xué)交流溝通，以便幫忙走出困境。
5. 談?wù)勀阕约旱囊恢羶蓚�觀點(diǎn)。
注意： 1. 詞數(shù)90左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好（不計入總詞數(shù)）；
2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文通順連貫；
3. 參考詞匯：aim n.目標(biāo)  confidence n. 信心
Boys and girls, the final exams are coming. What should we do in order to prepare well for the exams? Here are some suggestions.
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Answer 1

Boys and girls, the final exams are coming. What should we do in order to prepare well for the exams? Here are some suggestions.
Firstly, it’s very important for us to be in good moods. Don’t be nervous or stressed. Otherwise, we will not have the courage to face difficulties. Secondly, we should have aims. If we aim too low, we may become lazy. If we aim too high, we may lose confidence. Thirdly, don’t stay up late so that we can make ourselves energetic in class and pay attention to our study. Fourthly, we’d better have more communication with our parents, teachers and classmates. They can help us get out of trouble. Finally, a healthy diet is very useful as well.
With these done, I believe we can be successful in the exams.

試題分析：這篇短文要求我們就“如何為中考作準(zhǔn)備” 寫一篇發(fā)言稿。在題目中給了我們這篇短文的寫作提綱，主要包括五部分的內(nèi)容。一是關(guān)于情緒方面，如要保持良好的情緒，不要焦慮緊張，否則會沒有面對困難的勇氣；二是關(guān)于目標(biāo)方面，如制定合適的目標(biāo)，太低的目標(biāo)使人懶散，太高的目標(biāo)使人失去信心；三是不要熬夜，如以確保上課時精力旺盛，注意力集中。四是關(guān)于與父母等溝通方面，如多與父母、老師、同學(xué)交流溝通，以便幫忙走出困境。五是要談?wù)勀阕约旱囊恢羶蓚�觀點(diǎn)。提綱雖然已經(jīng)列好，但是很多內(nèi)容都需要我們自己去充實(shí)，讓它變得完整、合理，內(nèi)容豐富，這就需要花費(fèi)我們的想象力，以及我們平時積累的知識。另外，寫作時，還需注意語句間的銜接，使文意連貫，表達(dá)流暢。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】這是一篇比較不錯的作文。作者以Firstly、Secondly…為順序，講述了自己如何準(zhǔn)備中考，層次清晰表達(dá)到位。短文中需要作者自己補(bǔ)充的內(nèi)容完成得也不錯。如Finally, a healthy diet is very useful as well.With these done, I believe we can be successful in the exams.等。這些內(nèi)容都比較貼合文章的需要，意思也很連貫。文章中還用了一些比較好的句型，如Firstly, it’s very important for us to be in good moods. Thirdly, don’t stay up late so that we can make ourselves energetic in class and pay attention to our study. Fourthly, we’d better have more communication with our parents, teachers and classmates.等。