Question

14．Write a passage of at least 60words about the topic"A Ten-minute Break"．（以十分鐘的休息時間"為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格．．
提示：進(jìn)人初三以來，同學(xué)們倍感學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)重，壓力大．許多同學(xué)爭分奪秒甚至連課間十分鐘的休息時間也在看書做題．請以A Ten-minute Break為題，描寫這一現(xiàn)象（包括你自己的做法．并針對這一現(xiàn)象談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ?

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：So doing nothing tiring in that period is really good for us所以在那段時間不做任何累人的事對我們真的有好處．這里用動名詞doing  nothing tiring充當(dāng)主語，形容詞要放在不定代詞的后面，be good for sb．是一個固定短語，對某人有好處．
高分句型二：When the next class begins，I feel fresh again下節(jié)課開始時，我又感到新鮮．這是由when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句，翻譯成"當(dāng)…的時候"．

解答 A Ten-minute Break
      As a Junior Three student，time seems much limited．As a result，more and more students try to study from early morning till late afternoon，even during the ten-minute break（進(jìn)人初三以來，同學(xué)們倍感學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)重，壓力大）．In my opinion，to take a ten-minute break between classes is definitely necessary．Otherwise we will feel tired both physically and mentally．
      During the ten-minute break，we do something to get rid of tiredness．What we need is to have a real rest，instead of getting more tired．So doing nothing tiring in that period is really good for us（高分句型一）．（我的看法）
       My ten-minute break is always pleasing．Sometimes I do some simple exercises．Sometimes I have a free chat with my classmates or just take a walk outside．When the next class begins，I feel fresh again（高分句型二）（自己的做法）．

點評 在寫作時，要盡量使用高分單詞，短語和句子，句式，以便為文章增色．