Question

【題目】書面表達

下表是你和你最好朋友Tom的信息，請以“My best friend”為題寫一篇文章介紹你的好朋友。

要求：

1．表格中所有信息必須使用，表中省略的信息自己可以補充拓展。

2．突出主題，詳略得當。

3．不少于80個單詞。

姓名	相同(似)之處	不同之處
Tom	1．個頭一樣高。 2．愛運動，每周鍛煉兩三次。 3．都很友好，樂于助人。 4．周末常去遺愛湖……	1．你朋友文靜,而你…… 2．你喜歡肥皂劇，而你朋友喜歡…… 3．你朋友飲食習慣健康，而你…… 4．你朋友比你刻苦。

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Answer 1

【答案】

My best friend

Tom is my best friend. Let me tell you something between us.

We have some in common. Tom is as tall as me. We both like doing sports, and we will exercise together twice or three times a week. We are friendly to everyone. We think it’s fun to help others.

On weekends, we usually walk to Yi’ai Lake Park. The air there is the freshest in the city. We can enjoy our time quietly by taking a walk there.

However, we don’t think it’s necessary to be the same in everything. So there are also some differences between us. I’m funnier and more outgoing than Tom. He’s quiet. I like soap operas. I think they are relaxing to watch. But Tom likes watching news. He has healthy eating habits but I don’t. At school Tom is more hardworking than me, so he always gets higher grades.

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于提綱類短文，話題是“My best friend”，仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點。寫作時不要僅僅對要點進行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內容，使文章看起來更充實，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文，一定要談談自己的看法。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可。根據要表達的內容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；語言表達要符合英語習慣。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系。

寫作亮點：這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的作文，本文很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務。覆蓋所有內容要點；應用了較豐富的語法結構和詞匯如have …in common, as tall as ，be friendly to；we don’t think it’s necessary to be the same in everything.中的it’s necessary to be the same in everything.是賓語從句，it是從句的形式主語；語言表達要符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，用詞準確、句子通順、行文連貫。