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18．假如你叫魏華，3月8日婦女節(jié)那天，你為母親做了很多有意義的事情．請你根據(jù)表格中所給信息，用英語寫一篇日記．

上午	你用零花錢（pocket money）給媽媽買了一束（a bunch of）鮮花
下午	你去菜市場買菜，為家人做了一頓簡單而可口的飯菜
晚飯后	你把自己親手制作的賀卡送給媽媽，并祝她節(jié)日愉快，告訴她多保重身體…

注意：1）字數(shù)80-100字；
2）日記的開頭和結(jié)尾已寫好，不計入總次數(shù)；
3）日記需包括所有要點，可適當增加細節(jié)和適當發(fā)揮，使其通順、連貫．
8^th March Saturday                                                    Cloudy
Today is Women's Day．I love my mother so much that I've done a lot of things for her．
In the morning I boughtmany flowers with pocket money and put them in the vase．In the afternoon I went to the market to buy vegetables and cooked a simple but delicious dinner for my family．After supper，I gave Mother the card that I made myself and said"Happy Women's Day"to her．Then I told her to pay more attention to her health and not to overwork．I also promised to help her do some housework from today on．Hearing the words，Mother was moved to tears．
Today is a special day，warm and meaningful．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是寫一篇日記記錄婦女節(jié)那天你為母親做的很多有意義的事情．注意日記的格式．時態(tài)主要為一般過去時．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1．上午；你用零花錢給媽媽買了一束鮮花
2．下午；你去菜市場買菜，為家人做了一頓簡單而可口的飯菜
3．晚飯后；你把自己親手制作的賀卡送給媽媽，并祝她節(jié)日愉快，告訴她多保重身體

常用到的重點短語：
pocket money  零花錢
tell sb to do sth 告訴某人做某事
pay attention to 注意
promise to do sth 許諾做某事
【高分句型】
1．After supper，I gave Mother the card that I made myself and said"Happy Women's Day"to her．
that作為關系詞的定語從句，that作為從句的賓語，修飾先行詞card．
2．I also①promised to ②help her do some housework from today on．
①promise to do sth 許諾做某事
②help sb do sth 幫助某人做某事
3．①Hearing the words，Mother②was moved to tears
①動名詞短語做伴隨狀語．
②一般過去時的被動語態(tài)：was/were+過去分詞．

解答 8^th March Saturday                                                    Cloudy
Today is Women's Day．I love Mother so much that I've done many things for her．
    In the morning I bought many flowers with pocket money and put them in the vase．（上午；你用零花錢給媽媽買了一束鮮花）In the afternoon I went to the market to buy vegetables and cooked a simple but delicious dinner for my family．（下午；你去菜市場買菜，為家人做了一頓簡單而可口的飯菜）After supper，I gave and said"Happy Women's Day"to her【高分句型】．Then I told her to pay more attention to her health and not to overwork．（晚飯后；你把自己親手制作的賀卡送給媽媽，并祝她節(jié)日愉快，告訴她多保重身體）I also promised to help her do some housework from today on．【高分句型】Hearing the words，Mother was moved to tears．【高分句型】
Today is a special day，warm and meaningful．

點評 這是一篇圖表給出材料的作文，是一篇日記，應用文寫作要注意格式，圖表中給出的材料較為豐富，考生在寫作時，圖表內(nèi)容必須包括在內(nèi)，建議考生在平時的英語學習中積累一些常用到的重點句型和短語，出彩的發(fā)揮會給文章增色不少．