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4．校團(tuán)委準(zhǔn)備在教師節(jié)舉行征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示，回想自己在學(xué)習(xí)生活中遇到的最喜歡的一位老師，以"My Faborite Teacher"為題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇100詞左右的短文．
內(nèi)容包括：
1．對(duì)老師的相貌描述；
2．喜歡老師的原因：①講課很好；②與學(xué)生做朋友；③…
要求：
1．所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括所提供的信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2．不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
①Everyone has his or her favorite teacher at school，and so do I．每個(gè)人在學(xué)校都有他或她最喜歡的老師，我也一樣．句子中so+謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞+主語(yǔ)，這里運(yùn)用了倒裝語(yǔ)序，表示前面所說(shuō)的話(huà)也適合與后者．
②Maybe you'll wonder why she is considered my favorite teacher．也許你想知道為什么她被認(rèn)為是我最喜歡的老師．句子中wonder后面跟的是一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句，所使用的語(yǔ)序?yàn)殛愂鼍湔Z(yǔ)序．

解答 My Favorite teacher
Everyone has his or her favorite teacher at school，and so do I．（引出話(huà)題）My favorite teacher，Miss Lu，is a 30-year-old young lady of medium height，with big eyes and long straight hair．She wears glasses and often gets dressed in different styles of clothes．And a big smile can be always found on her round face．（對(duì)老師的相貌描寫(xiě)）
Maybe you'll wonder why she is considered my favorite teacher．Well，as our English teacher，she does good job in her classes．I can easily understand everything she tells us and would like to finish each task she leaves us after class．Another example is that she's so kind and friendly that she's friends with each of her students．We （especially I） like to share everything about our pleasure or problems in our school life．Some even asks her to help with their family problems!（喜歡老師的原因）
All in all，I love Miss Lu so much．Whenever I think of her，a strong feeling of joy can always fill my heart!（我的感受）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇提綱作文，抓住喜歡的一位老師這個(gè)主題，要做到語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，詞匯及時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，能夠把提示的內(nèi)容敘述清楚，語(yǔ)句通順．