Question

8．Write a passage of at least 60words on the topic“My Colorful Childhood”（以“我的美好童年”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格．）
（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分．）
The following is for reference only．（以下表達(dá)僅供參考）
•I dream of…
•It is exciting/necessary/helpful to…

Answer 1

分析 本文為記敘文，要求記敘自己的童年．人稱為第一人稱為主，時態(tài)為一般過去時為主．根據(jù)表達(dá)方面的提示，可以知道寫作要點為：1，童年的經(jīng)歷；2，童年回憶的感受．考生需結(jié)合自己的童年回憶來說．
重要短語和詞匯：
curious 好奇心強(qiáng)的
imaginative 富有想象力的
architect 建筑師
cellar 地窖
make out 制定
lift up 舉起
shovel 鏟子
by hand 用手
underground 地下地，在地下
disappointed 失望的
look back 回顧
高分句型：
句型一：
What①impressed me most is that I drew one house which②was like a big cellar．
讓我印象最深刻的是我畫了一個像個大地窖的房子．
①what引導(dǎo)主語從句，在句中充當(dāng)主語．②which引導(dǎo)限制性定語從句
句型二：
We began to dig，hoping that we could make out a house underground．
我們開始挖，希望能挖出一個地下的房子．
hoping 原形為hope，此處用現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語
句型三：
It wasn’t such a bad experience but a funny one．
這不是很壞的經(jīng)歷，但是（反而）非常有趣．
否定詞+but 雙重否定表示肯定  此用法用來強(qiáng)調(diào)but后面的內(nèi)容．

解答 My Colorful Childhood
When I was a little girl，I was very curious and imaginative．I had so many dreams．I dreamt of being an architect as well as a great painter．What impressed me most is that I drew one house which was like a big cellar．【高分句型一】After making out the house model，I asked my brother for help．We lifted up with shovels on our shoulders and went out to the field．We began to dig，hoping that we could make out a house underground．【高分句型二】After about half and a hour，we stopped digging since we found that it was too hard to make out a house underground by hand．That made us really disappointed．（童年的經(jīng)歷）
Nowadays，I would laugh whenever I look back on this experience．It wasn’t such a bad experience but a funny one．【高分句型三】I still dream to be an architect and hope my dream will come true one day．（童年回憶的感受）

點評 題目要求不限制考生的想象力，考生可以選一個印象最深刻的經(jīng)歷，圍繞主題進(jìn)行敘述，寫出真情實感．