Question

11．元旦就要來了，做一個假期旅行計劃．
1你計劃和父母親乘飛機去北京旅行．
2北京是我們的首都也是一個美麗的城市．
3要去參觀天安門、長城等很多名勝．
4要拍很多的照片．
5要買很多喜歡的東西．
請根據(jù)以上要點寫一篇短文，注意不要逐字翻譯，80字左右．
My vacation plan
The New Year is coming．Weplanto havea vacation trip．Myparentsand I plan totravel to Beijing by plane．Beijing is the capital ofChina．Itisalsoa beautiful city．We are going to visitthe TiananmenSquare，the Great Wall and many places of interest．Of course，we are going to take lots of photos．I want to buy a lot of thingsthat I like．I am going to buy some interesting things for my friends as gifts．I'm sure we will have a great time in Beijing．．

Answer 1

分析 根據(jù)題目提示，我們應(yīng)該確定本文的主要時態(tài)是用一般將來時及一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱應(yīng)該主要用第一人稱；注意描述的順序；注意時態(tài)，人稱和固定詞組搭配，注意連詞的運用．注意句子的順暢，應(yīng)符合英語的表達習(xí)慣．
①My parents and I plan to travel to Beijing by plane我父母和我計劃乘飛機去北京．這里plan to do sth計劃做某事，后面跟動詞原形，by plane乘飛機．
②I want to buy a lot of things that I like．我想買很多我喜歡的東西．句子中want to do sth表示想做某事，that I like作定語修飾things．

解答 My vacation plan
The New Year is coming．We plan to have a vacation trip．（引出話題）My parents and I plan to travel to Beijing by plane（高分句型）（計劃去北京旅行）．Beijing is the capital of China．It is also a beautiful city（簡單介紹一下北京）．We are going to visit the Tiananmen Square，the Great Wall and many places of interest．（我們要參觀的地方）Of course，we are going to take lots of photos．I want to buy a lot of things that I like．（高分句型）I am going to buy some interesting things for my friends as gifts．（拍照與購物）．I'm sure we will have a great time in Beijing．

點評 文中用了許多固定短語，如plan to do，places of interest，take lots of photos等．文章的句式也較豐富，兩種一般將來時態(tài)結(jié)構(gòu)be going to 與will使用恰當(dāng)．文筆流暢，效果不錯．