Question

書面表達（共15分）

假如你是李紅，是一名新轉入的外地學生，幾個星期來，老師和同學們對你的關心和幫助讓你倍感溫暖。請你根據下面提示語寫一則日記，敘述這幾個星期以來他們對你的關心、幫助以及你的感受和愿望。

生活方面：1.同學們從家中帶來當?shù)乜煽诘氖澄锝o我吃；

2.同學們帶我參觀校園，周末邀請我到他們家做客；

3.下午放學后，同學們經常帶我去操場跑步；

思想方面：老師、同學們找我談心，和我交朋友。

學習方面：······

感受和愿望：······

要求：1.詞數(shù)80~100

2.要點齊全，行文連貫，可適當發(fā)揮。

參考詞匯：當?shù)氐? local 談心talk with

6th June

My teachers and classmates have helped me a iot since I came here.They brought

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

6th June

My teachers and classmates have helped me a lot since I came here. They brought me local food from their homes. They were very delicious. My classmates showed me around our school. They even invited me to their homes, watching TV and enjoying dinner. After school they often ran and played volleyball with me in the playground. They came to talk with me when we were free. We have been good friends. They helped me with my lessons. When I had problems, I went to them for help. I feel very happy here. I hope to make more friends and make progress in my studies.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，要求根據所給要點寫一則日記。本文所給材料比較詳細，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內容表達出來。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當發(fā)揮。根據材料內容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，主語是第三人稱，注意時態(tài)與時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系。在寫作時還要注意日記的格式。

【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少.如: show around帶領……參觀; help sb with sth幫助某人做某事；They came to talk with me when we were free.和When I had problems, I went to them for help等,學習中注意總結,牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理.

考點：提綱作文。