Question

8．母愛情深，父愛無價(jià)，師恩無限，友情可貴．在生活中，有許多值得感恩的人，請(qǐng)以Love for ______ 為題，寫一篇短文．
要求：1．請(qǐng)將題目補(bǔ)充完整．
2．用80-120詞寫一篇完整的短文．描述你所感恩的人；感恩的原因并列舉感恩的事例；你將為他/她做些什么來表達(dá)你的感激之情．
提示：1．開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
2．短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名及其他相關(guān)真實(shí)信息．
3．凡照抄本試卷里的文章段落，一律不得分．
Love formy mother
We need love，we also need to love others．The person I love most is my mother．The person I love most is my mother．My mother is 41 years old．She is of medium build with long black hair．Shi is quiet．She is a history teacher in a middle school．She likes dancing．She can cook delicious food．
She did a lot for me when I was a child．She bought whatever I needed for my study，even though she didn't have much money．She sent me from piano lessons to dancing lessons at the weekend．She cooked delicious and healthy food for me．
When I grow up，I will do what I can to make my mother happy．I will find a good job after I graduate from college．I'll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young．I'll take her to wonderful sights around China．Most importantly，I will stay with her when I have free time．That's what she wants most，I think．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
She bought ①whatever I needed for my study，②even though she didn't have much money．即使她沒有足夠的錢，她給我買任何我需要的學(xué)習(xí)用品．
①whatever無論什么．引導(dǎo)的賓語從句，作為buy的賓語．
②even though引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句．
【高分句型二】
I'll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young．我會(huì)存錢給他買新衣服讓她看起來仍然年輕．
that make her look still young是一定語從句，修飾先行詞clothes，關(guān)系詞that作為定語從句的主語，不可省略．

解答 Love for my mother
We need love，we also need to love others．The person I love most is my mother．The person I love most is my mother．My mother is 41 years old．She is of medium build with long black hair．She is quiet．She is a history teacher in a middle school．She likes dancing．She can cook delicious food．（介紹）
She did a lot for me when I was a child．She bought whatever I needed for my study，even though she didn't have much money．【高分句型一】She sent me from piano lessons to dancing lessons at the weekend．She cooked delicious and healthy food for me．（她為我做的事）
When I grow up，I will do what I can to make my mother happy．I will find a good job after I graduate from college．I'll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young．【高分句型二】I'll take her to wonderful sights around China．Most importantly，I will stay with her when I have free time．That's what she wants most，I think．（我將會(huì)為她做什么）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點(diǎn)，不可遺漏．需在平時(shí)積累相關(guān)的詞匯，寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系．上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．