Question

1．"贈(zèng)人玫瑰，手有余香"，幫助別人的快樂(lè)會(huì)讓我們的生活變得更美好．你曾經(jīng)幫助過(guò)別人嗎？請(qǐng)以 I enjoy helping others為題寫一篇不少于60詞短文．
內(nèi)容包括：1What do you usually do to help others？
2How do you feel about helping others？
3What will you do in the future？
提示詞語(yǔ)：in school，out of school，help，classmates，old people，think，happy
注意：短文中，不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)人名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分．
I enjoy helping others
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Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I think①②it is a pleasure to help others in our daily lives我認(rèn)為在日常生活中幫助他人是一種快樂(lè)．
①think后是省略that的賓語(yǔ)從句．
②it是形式主語(yǔ)，動(dòng)詞不定式做真正主語(yǔ)．
【高分句型二】
when I see old people walking across the road with heavy bags，I will go up to them and give them a helping hand當(dāng)我看見(jiàn)拿著重物的老人在過(guò)馬路的時(shí)候，我會(huì)走上前，幫助他們．
when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句．

解答 I enjoy helping others
I think it is a pleasure to help others in our daily lives．【高分句型一】I enjoy helping others．
At school，I will help my classmates to do their homework，especially if there are some difficult problems．I also help our teachers collect exercise books．I help my teachers a lot．
At home，I usually help my mother to do housework．My mother always says："Well done!"
On the road，when I see old people walking across the road with heavy bags，I will go up to them and give them a helping hand．【高分句型二】（怎樣幫助他人）
I feel very happy after helping others．（感受）I will keep helping others and pass the spirit of helping others to everyone around me．（將來(lái)打算）

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