Question

節(jié)日是我們最喜歡的，節(jié)日期間會有很多慶祝活動。以My Favorite Festival 為題寫一篇60個詞左右的小短文。
要求：1.字跡工整，請大家不要用涂改液和涂改帶。
2.句子簡潔明了，意思表達(dá)清楚、準(zhǔn)確。
3.注意句子的連貫性和邏輯性。
4.內(nèi)容包括節(jié)日的時間、節(jié)日之前的準(zhǔn)備工作、禮儀、飲食、禮物和孩子們的活動及表現(xiàn)等。
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Answer 1

My Favorite Festival   
There are many traditional festivals in China,such as Spring Festival， Mid-Autumn Day and so on. My favorite festival is Spring Festival.Spring Festival is the most important traditional holiday in China. It usually lasts for 7 days. Days before the festival,people clean their houses. They think cleaning sweeps any bad luck. They decorate their houses with paper cuts. On the eve of the festival， family members get together and have big meals,including jaiozi. Then they watch the Spring Festival programs on TV. At midnight，they set off fireworks to welcome the new year. During the festival，kids get lucky money from old people. People visit their relatives and friends. They wish each a happy year and good luck.

試題分析：試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是介紹自己最喜歡的節(jié)日，要用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，注意時態(tài)語時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少.如: such as 例如；and so on 等等；set off 燃放；get ---from從……得到；They think cleaning sweeps any bad luck.他們認(rèn)為大掃除能清除任何霉運。they set off fireworks to welcome the new year.他們?nèi)挤艧熁▉響c祝新年的到來。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理.