Question

3．Write at least 60words on the topic"Tom's Christmas"
（以湯姆的圣誕節(jié)為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格）
湯姆在圣誕節(jié)發(fā)生了什么事？由此他產(chǎn)生了怎樣的感想？請根據(jù)圖片進行描述．
（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實人名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分．）

The following is for reference only．（以下表達僅供參考）
Strange，disappointed
At midnight
The next morning．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
 He thinks that he must have Christmas gift from Santa Claus who will come in through the chimney  他認為他一定會收到從煙囪里進來的圣誕老人的圣誕禮物．首先這是一個賓語從句，He thinks 是主句，that he must have Christmas gift from Santa Claus who will come in through the chimney，同時在從句中又有一個定語從句 who will come in through the chimney，修飾先行詞  Santa Claus．
高分句型二
He is so happy that he couldn't say a word．他是如此高興，以至于一句話也說不出來．so…that，如此…以至于．

解答 Tom's Christmas
Tom is a middle-school student．It's December 24th．It's Christmas Eve【開頭點明主題】．He thinks that he must have Christmas gift from Santa Claus who will come in through the chimney【高分句型一，注意從句的使用】．He looks for his gifts everywhere．But he finds nothing．He feels very disappointed and goes to sleep．The next morning he finds a big nice gift on his bed．He is so happy that he couldn't say a word【高分句型二，注意固定句型的使用】．He knows that it is his father that came in to his room and sent him the gift at midnight．【正文部分詳細介紹圖片內(nèi)容】In fact love is from our family and our friends．【結(jié)尾緊扣主題】

點評 本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點，不可遺漏．需在平時積累相關(guān)的詞匯，寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系．上下文之間可以適當使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．