Question

12．如今，中學(xué)生已成為網(wǎng)絡(luò)群體的一部分，他們擁有各自精彩的網(wǎng)絡(luò)生活．在英語(yǔ)課堂上，同學(xué)們分組談?wù)摿诉@一話(huà)題．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下你們小組談話(huà)的內(nèi)容，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇匯報(bào)材料．

Group members	What to do on the Internet
Gao Min	share photos in her QQ Zone（空間）
Chen Lin	play chess against others
Ye Qi	learn English
I	…

要求：（1）語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，語(yǔ)法正確，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；
（2）必須包含所給內(nèi)容，并做適當(dāng)拓展；
（3）詞數(shù)70左右．（文章開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）
Today，more and more students like doing different kinds of things on the Internet．In my group，Gao Min likes taking photos and …
she often shares photos in her QQ Zone．The photos are very beautiful．You can enjoy them anytime．Chen Lin's hobby is playing chess，so he often plays chess against others on the Internet．Ye Qi thinks it's good to learn English on line．She makes many foreign friends and often chats with them in English．As for me，I am interested in playing games with my classmates．It always makes us excited．And I am fond of listening to songs and watching movies on line，too．
The Internet makes our lives colorful．We really like it．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是匯報(bào)針對(duì)中學(xué)生的網(wǎng)絡(luò)生活的討論結(jié)果．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱(chēng)主要為第三人稱(chēng)．
寫(xiě)作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1高敏：QQ空間分享照片
2陳琳：和別人下棋
3葉琪：學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)
4我…
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)
on the Internet網(wǎng)絡(luò)上
make friends交朋友
chat with sb與某人聊天
be interested in 對(duì)…感興趣
make sb+adj讓某人怎樣
be fond of 喜歡…
高分句型：
1． Ye Qi thinks①②it's good to learn English online．
①think后接上省略了引導(dǎo)詞that的賓語(yǔ)從句．
②it作為形式主語(yǔ)，動(dòng)詞不定式是真正主語(yǔ)．
2．It always makes us excited．
mke sb+adj讓某人怎么樣，make的用法．

解答 Today，more and more students like doing different kinds of things on the Internet．In my group，Gao Min likes taking photos and she often shares photos in her QQ Zone．（高敏：QQ空間分享照片）The photos are very beautiful．You can enjoy them anytime．Chen Lin's hobby is playing chess，so he often plays chess against others on the Internet．（陳琳：和別人下棋）Ye Qi thinks it's good to learn English on line．（高分句型）（葉琪：學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)）She makes many foreign friends and often chats with them in English．As for me，I am interested in playing games with my classmates．It always makes us excited．（高分句型）And I am fond of listening to songs and watching movies on line，too．（我：打游戲，聽(tīng)歌，看電影）
   The Internet makes our lives colorful．We really like it．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本題是一篇圖表作文，圖表作為書(shū)面表達(dá)的一種信息提示方式，比提綱作文線(xiàn)索顯得更簡(jiǎn)潔明了，寫(xiě)作時(shí)也容易區(qū)分表達(dá)，本題在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，要特別注意幾種情況的描述，不能逐句翻譯，同時(shí)要根據(jù)提示有效靈活的構(gòu)思，恰當(dāng)使用邏輯詞語(yǔ)，讓文章顯得有條理，不雜亂．