Question

根據(jù)中英文提示，寫(xiě)一篇內(nèi)容完整、意思連貫、邏輯清晰，不少于60詞的短文。假如你是大明，上周六你和父母去頤和園游玩，請(qǐng)你向同學(xué)們介紹一下頤和園和你們的游玩經(jīng)歷及感受。開(kāi)頭已給出。

Distance （距離）	twenty kilometers from the centre of the city
Size	covers(覆蓋) 2.9 square kilometers
Famous Tourist Spot(旅游景點(diǎn))	the Longevity Hill(萬(wàn)壽山)

提示詞：lovely park， drive， find， decide， climb up to， view， foreigners， I hope . . .

My parents and I spent some time off in the Summer Palace last Saturday.

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Answer 1

My parents and I spent some time off in the Summer Palace last Saturday. It is a lovely park in the west of Beijing. It's only twenty kilometers from the center of the city. It covers 2.9 square kilometers. One of the famous tourist spot is the Longevity Hill. My father drove us to the park that morning andit took us about 2 hours. We found that there were many people in the park. So we decided to climb up to the top of the Longevity Hill. When we got there, we had a clear view of the whole park. There we met a few foreigners. They said that they liked Beijing very much. I was really proud of our city when I heard that. I hope our city will become more and more beautiful and people all over the world will come to visit it every year.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇利用圖表的給材料作文。要求介紹去頤和園的旅行。要求介紹距離，面積及旅游景點(diǎn)

因?yàn)槭敲枋鲞^(guò)去的事情，所以主要用過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)。因?yàn)槭呛透改溉ヂ眯校�所以主要用第一人稱復(fù)數(shù)。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)用正確，語(yǔ)言流暢，能適當(dāng)?shù)倪\(yùn)用連詞，應(yīng)用了大量的短語(yǔ)和高級(jí)句式，如We found that there were many people in the park. So，There we met a few foreigners.，I was really proud of our city when I heard that，I hope our city will become more and more beautiful等，這使文章更豐富，更有邏輯性。

考點(diǎn)：表格作文。