Question

1．人生，就像如圖所示的漫畫，充滿喜怒哀樂，時而恐慌，時而陷入沉思．請你以I like to be_____為題，寫篇短文，敘述與上面漫畫表情有關的一段故事或經(jīng)歷（詞數(shù)80～100）．步驟與要點如下．
1．確定主題，并在文中說明原因；
2．圍繞主題，進行敘述；
3．講述一段與主題有關的故事或經(jīng)歷．
要求：
1．補全標題（可選擇A節(jié)方框中的詞匯，也可選用其他詞匯） （精校）；
2．字跡工整，語言規(guī)范；
3．鼓勵寫出真情實感，對緊扣主題的適當發(fā)揮不予扣分；
4．文中不要出現(xiàn)考生的真實校名和姓名．
I like to behappy
Life is a colorful picture full of different feelings I'd like to be happy becausehappiness plays an important part in the world．It can make us do some things better．It can also make us confident．So I would like to be happy．
One day，there was an exam．It was very important．So many students were afraid to face it．They felt very nervous．And they were afraid to fail the exam．But I was very happy to get a chance to prove myself．And I reviewed the lessons carefully．In the end I passed the exam successfully as well as got high marks．

I have learned about the importance of happiness．So let's be happy together．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是以I like to be_____為題敘述與上面漫畫表情有關的一段故事或經(jīng)歷．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時．人稱主要為第一人稱和第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1．確定主題，并在文中說明原因；
2．圍繞主題，進行敘述；
3．講述一段與主題有關的故事或經(jīng)歷．
常用到的重點短語：
play a part扮演一個角色
make sb do sth讓某人做某事
make sb+adj讓某人怎么樣
be afraid to do sth害怕做某事
as well as 也
【高分句型】
1．I'd like to be happy ①because happiness②plays an important part in the world．
①because引導的原因狀語從句．
②play an important part  扮演一個重要角色．
2．①In the end I passed the exam successfully②as well as got high marks．
①in the end最后，最終．
②as well as 也，連接兩個并列的同等成分．

解答 I like to be happy
      Life is a colorful picture full of different feelings．I'd like to be happy（確定主題） because happiness plays an important part in the world．【高分句型】（說明原因）It can make us do some things better．It can also make us confident．So I would like to be happy．（進行敘述） 
         One day，there was an exam．It was very important．So many students were afraid to face it．They felt very nervous．And they were afraid to fail the exam．But I was very happy to get a chance to prove myself．And I reviewed the lessons carefully．In the end I passed the exam successfully as well as got high marks．【高分句型】（一段有關經(jīng)歷）
         I have learned about the importance of happiness．So let's be happy together

點評 這是一篇提綱作文．考生在把握了文章的中心后，應在內(nèi)心構(gòu)思一個基本的框架，并考慮使用恰當?shù)脑~語、短語和句型，以充分地表達文章的內(nèi)容．盡可能地充分利用所學的短語或句型來表述具體的內(nèi)容，避免使用無把握或偏、難句型．注意所寫句子要符合英語的表達習慣