Question

針對(duì)社會(huì)上人們對(duì)90后年輕人的某些評(píng)論，英語(yǔ)課上同學(xué)們與老師就此展開(kāi)了討論。作為一名90后的中學(xué)生，請(qǐng)參考下面的提示詞寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)發(fā)言稿，展示真實(shí)的你。
要求：1. 語(yǔ)句通順，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，內(nèi)容連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)校名、姓名等相關(guān)信息；
3. 詞數(shù)：不少于80詞。發(fā)言稿的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯：selfish(自私的) ; Internet; believe in oneself; high ideals(崇高理想); in style, creative
As we know, most of us are the only child in our families now. ____________________
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We are growing up. We are sure to do better.

Answer 1

One possible version
As we know, most of us are the only child in our families now. Our parents love us very much and they try their best to do everything for us, which make us become selfish. Usually we are so concentrate on the Internet that we have less time to communicate with others.
There is no doubt that we have our own advantages as well.
We teenagers have high ideals. We always believe in ourselves and never say “die”. Meanwhile we are in style. New ideas can be easily accepted by us. You can find out that creative thinking is full of our life. We also know how to respect your parents and teachers.
We are growing up. We are sure to do better.

試題分析：這是一篇話題類作文，且是寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)發(fā)言稿，展示真實(shí)的你，所以要用第一人稱來(lái)寫(xiě)，且要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。需要寫(xiě)的內(nèi)容沒(méi)有給出，所以可以自由發(fā)揮的空間很大。需要注意緊扣文章主題，和開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾有一個(gè)很好的銜接。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。同時(shí)注意要求的字?jǐn)?shù)不少于80詞，不要太多也不要太少，同時(shí)注意文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)校名、姓名等相關(guān)信息。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于話題類作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫(xiě)作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。