Question

17．假如你是李華，有一批來自法國的交換生即將到你們學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)．請你根據(jù)圖片及提示詞，為即將到來的交換生用英文寫一篇介紹自己及家鄉(xiāng)的發(fā)言稿．

內(nèi)容包括：
1．自我介紹；
2．介紹家鄉(xiāng)有關(guān)環(huán)保情況（save water，drop litter…）；
3．介紹家鄉(xiāng)人民的精神面貌（friendly，hard-working …）；
4．介紹家鄉(xiāng)的新面貌 （tall buildings，wide roads …）．
注意：
1．條理清楚，字跡工整，詞數(shù)80個左右，圍繞主題可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2．發(fā)言稿的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不記入總詞數(shù)；
3．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的地名和姓名．
Good morning everyone，
It's my honor to introduce something about myself and my hometown to you．
                      ．
That's all．Thank you for your listening．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
They are friendly to each other他們彼此很友好．
be friendly to sb 對某人友好
【高分句型二】
Nowadays many tall buildings and wide roads can be seen here and there如今四處可見高樓和寬闊的路．
many tall buildings and wide roads 是see的承受者，結(jié)合can用情態(tài)動詞的被動語態(tài)---情態(tài)動詞+be+過去分詞．

解答 Good morning everyone，
It's my honor to introduce something about myself and my hometown to you．
I'm Li Hua，15 years old．（自我介紹）My hometown is a lovely and green city．The people here have a good habit to save water．They don't drop litter everywhere．Besides，people plant many trees every year．（家鄉(xiāng)有關(guān)環(huán)保情況）All the people here are hard-working．They are friendly to each other．【高分句型一】（家鄉(xiāng)人民的精神面貌）My hometown is a new city．Nowadays many tall buildings and wide roads can be seen here and there【高分句型二】．（家鄉(xiāng)的新面貌）We live a happy life here．I love my hometown．Welcome to my hometown．
That's all．Thank you for your listening．

點評 提綱類作文的要點都給了出來，在寫作的時候需要使用合適的連接詞把這些要點連接成一個整體．同時注意使用高級詞匯和句式讓文章更有亮點．