Question

5．某中學網(wǎng)站提出"走路去上學"的倡議，請你就這一話題寫一篇約80-100詞的英語短文．
內(nèi)容提示：
1．走路有利于健康安全；
2．和同學結(jié)伴可以互相了解，相互幫助；
3．不需要父母接送，學會自理；
4．道路上車輛減少，城市不再擁堵；
5．有利于保護環(huán)境；
要求：
1要點齊全，條理清楚，語句通順，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范．
2文中不得出現(xiàn)真實校名及姓名，否則不予評分．
3開頭已給出，不計入總次數(shù)，可適當發(fā)揮．
參考詞匯：
be good for  有利于，each other 互相，no longer不再，crowded 擁堵
Walking to school
I think walking to school is good for us．First of all，walking to school is a wonderful way toexercise and it's good for health．Next，it's fun to walk together withfriends every day．We can talkabout somethinginteresting and know each other better．What's more，if we walk，our parentswon't have to drive us to school．We can learn to look after ourselves．There will be fewer cars in the city．Morewalking and less driving helps tomake our city cleaner．The streets won't be as crowded as they are now．Walking to school helps usprotect the environment as well．I hope more and morestudents will walk to school．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容說說走路去上學的優(yōu)點．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第三人稱和第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1．走路有利于健康安全；
2．和同學結(jié)伴可以互相了解，相互幫助；
3．不需要父母接送，學會自理；
4．道路上車輛減少，城市不再擁堵；
5．有利于保護環(huán)境
常用到的重點短語：
be good for  有利于
each other 互相
what's more再者
as…as與…一樣…
比較級+and+比較級 越來越…
【高分句型】
1．①First of all，②walking to school is a wonderful way ③to exercise and ④it's good for health．
①first of all首先．
②動名詞做主語，謂語動詞用單數(shù)．
③動詞不定式做后置定語修飾way．
④be good for  有利于
2．①What's more，②if we walk，our parents won't have to drive us to school．
①what's more再者
②if引導的條件狀語從句，遵循主將從現(xiàn)的規(guī)則．

解答 Walking to school
    I think walking to school is good for us．First of all，walking to school is a wonderful way to exercise and it's good for health．（走路有利于健康安全）【高分句型】Next，it's fun to walk together with friends every day．We can talk about something interesting and know each other better．（和同學結(jié)伴可以互相了解，相互幫助）What's more，if we walk，our parents won't have to drive us to school．【高分句型】We can learn to look after ourselves．（不需要父母接送，學會自理）There will be fewer cars in the city．More walking and less driving helps to make our city cleaner．The streets won't be as crowded as they are now．（道路上車輛減少，城市不再擁堵）Walking to school helps us protect the environment as well．（有利于保護環(huán)境）I hope more and more students will walk to school．

點評 本篇作文由于提綱材料本身決定了寫作對象、范圍、目的、體裁等，命題者的意圖往往較容易領悟，考生在審題上一般不會出現(xiàn)障礙．可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點提示運用相關(guān)的句型結(jié)構(gòu)靈活的展開作文．考生需注意不要逐詞逐句地進行翻譯，所寫句子要符合英語的表達習慣．