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根據(jù)下面3幅圖的提示，寫一篇70～80個單詞的短文．要求能充分表達出圖畫所示的內(nèi)容，意思連貫、完整、語法正確．

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學生：習作： 　　Yesterday morning Meimei got up at half past six at usually(X1). After breakfast, she went to school. On the way she found a wallet lain(X2) on the road. She picked up it(X3) and stood on the roadside. She waited for a while, but nobody came and looked for it. 　　“What shall I do?” she said to herself. “If I'll wait(X4) the owner, I'll be late for school.” 　　At last she decided to send it to the police. 　　She went to the police station and gave the wallet to the policeman. 　　“You're a good girl. Thank you.” a policeman said. 　　When he went(X5) to school. Meimei was just in time for class. 　　剖析：“as usual”是固定詞組，意為“照常；像往常一樣”．不可寫作“as usually”． 　　2．“lain on the road”作found的復合賓語補足語是錯誤的．應(yīng)該用帶現(xiàn)在分詞的復合賓語lying on the road．lying是lie(在……處[有])的現(xiàn)在分詞，此處意為“她發(fā)現(xiàn)在路上有一只皮夾子．” 　　3．“picked up it”是錯誤的．須知，當代詞(it，them等)作 pick up的賓語時，必須位于pick up之間，如：pick it up；如果是名詞作賓語，用“pick up +n．”或“pick +n．+up”都可以． 　　4．“If I'll wait for…I'll be late…”句中的從句時態(tài)錯誤．須知，在帶有條件(或時間)從句的復合句中，當主句中的謂語用將來時時，從句中的謂語用現(xiàn)在時表示“將來”．因此，須將該句改寫為：“If I wait for…”． 　　5．此處，按情景，不是“went to school”(上學)，而是“到達學�！�，故應(yīng)將went改為got，即：“when she got to school”(get to到達)． 　　總評：這篇習作能抓住圖畫要點，語言上雖有幾處失誤，但敘事清楚，行文流暢，意思連貫，詞語、結(jié)構(gòu)運用得當，如：decided to send…to…；gave the wallet to…；in time for class；等等．尤其是文中對話，能貼近情景，頗有生動感．