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17．Traffic rules help to keep order on the road．They also help to keep people safe．Traffic accidents killed more than 104，000people in China last year．As we all know there are more cars than before．So drivers and pedestrians （行人） must work together to make the roads much safer．
The pedestrian（行人） has as many rules to follow as the drivers．You should walk on the sidewalk（人行道） on the road．Always look carefully before you walk across the street．
If you often ride a bike，don't ride in the middle of the road or run through red traffic lights．When you ride a bike with a friend，don't look around or talk．
Drivers should slow down at the traffic lights．And the driver and passengers must always wear seat belts （安全帶）．Without seat belts，they may be badly hurt in a sudden accident．
You must be careful if you have to travel in a bus．Get on or get off a bus only after it stops．When it is full，don't try to get inside，or you may fall off．
Traffic rules are road safety rules．Please remember the famous saying"Thinking about others"．

看了上面這篇短文后，請你根據(jù)下面的寫作要點(diǎn)提示，針對同學(xué)們的真實(shí)情況，寫一篇演講稿，告訴同學(xué)們應(yīng)如何遵守交通規(guī)則．
【寫作要點(diǎn)】介紹學(xué)校大部分同學(xué)上學(xué)的交通方式．
【寫作要點(diǎn)】
（1）介紹學(xué)校大部分同學(xué)上學(xué)的交通方式．
（2）指出同學(xué)們兩種或以上違反交通規(guī)則的行為．
（3）針對同學(xué)們的這些行為，告訴大家應(yīng)怎樣做才安全．
【寫作要求】
（1）不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出現(xiàn)真實(shí)校名、班級和姓名等．
（2）語句連貫，詞數(shù)70詞左右．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
 My dear friends，
There are more and more cars on the roads．It is important for us to obey the traffic rules．
If everyone obeys the traffic rules，there will be fewer accidents．
That's all．Thank you!

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
It is important for us to obey the traffic rules．
這句話使用的句型為：it is+形容詞+for sb to do sth；其中"it"為形式主語，代指"to obey the traffic rules"．這句話意為：對我們來說遵守交通規(guī)則很重要．
高分句型二：
If we don't obey the rules，we'll be in danger．
句中"If we don't obey the rules"為"if"引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，遵循"主將從現(xiàn)"原則．"in danger"意為"處于危險之中"．這句話意為：如果我們不遵守交通規(guī)則，我們將會遇到危險．

解答 My dear friends，
There are more and more cars on the roads．It is important for us to obey the traffic rules．【高分句型一】（點(diǎn)明主旨）
In our school，most students go to school by bike．But some of us don't obey the rules．Some ride on the left of the road or go across the road when the traffic light is red．It's too dangerous．【兩種或以上違反交通規(guī)則的行為】I think we must be careful on the road．We should ride on the right instead of the left．We should also pay attention to the traffic around us and know traffic signals．If we don't obey the rules，we'll be in danger．【高分句型二】If everyone obeys the traffic rules，there will be fewer accidents．（建議）
That's all．Thank you!（致謝）

點(diǎn)評 寫作文時要注意平時語言的積累，避免出現(xiàn)語法錯誤，寫作時注意條理清楚，語意通暢．