Question

14．你校英語社團正在開展主題為"What should a good teacher be like？"的討論，為此你采訪
了一些學(xué)生和家長．請你根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容．用英語寫一篇短文進行交流，并闡述你的觀點．

學(xué)生主要觀點	家長主要觀點	你的觀點
與學(xué)生相處融洽 課堂生動有趣	學(xué)識廣博 嚴格要求學(xué)生	…

注意：（1）文章必須包括表中所有內(nèi)容．可適當增加細節(jié)．
（2）你的觀點至少兩條，不能重復(fù)表中觀點；
（3）詞數(shù)：80-100；
（4）短文首句僅供選擇使用，不計人總詞數(shù)．
短文首句：Students and parents have different opinions about what a good teacher
should be like．
What should a good teacher be like？
Students and parents have different opinions about what a good teacher should be like．
As for students，they think a good teacher should get along well with their students．And they are supposed to try to make their classes lively and active so that students can learn better with great interest．Different from students，parents think it's very important for a good teacher to have plenty of knowledge．What's more，teachers should be strict with their students．
In my opinion，the most important thing for a good teacher is to trust and encourage students，especially those who have difficulties in learning．Anyway，they are expected to help their students learn how to learn well．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是總結(jié)"What should a good teacher be like？"話題的討論后的結(jié)果并說說自己的觀點．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1 學(xué)生主要觀點：與學(xué)生相處融洽；課堂生動有趣
2 家長主要觀點：學(xué)識廣博；嚴格要求學(xué)生
3 你的觀點 （至少兩條）
常用到的重點短語：
get along with sb 與某人相處
be supposed to  應(yīng)該
what's more 再者
be strict with sb 對某人嚴格
have difficulties in doing sth 做某事有困難

【高分句型】
1．And they ①are supposed to②try to③make their classes lively and active ④so that students can learn better with great interest．
①be supposed to do sth  應(yīng)該做某事
②try to do sth 盡力做某事
③make sth+adj 讓某事怎么樣
④so that引導(dǎo)的目的狀語從句．
2．①In my opinion，the most important thing for a good teacher is ②to trust and encourage students，especially those③who have difficulties in learning．
①in one's opinion 在某人看來
②動詞不定式做表語，與is構(gòu)成系表結(jié)構(gòu)．
②定語從句，先行詞those，who是關(guān)系詞，做從句的主語．

解答 What should a good teacher be like？Students and parents have different opinions about what a good teacher should be like．
As for students，they think a good teacher should get along well with their students．And they are supposed to try to make their classes lively and active so that students can learn better with great interest．（與學(xué)生相處融洽；課堂生動有趣）【高分句型】Different from students，parents think it's very important for a good teacher to have plenty of knowledge．What's more，teachers should be strict with their students．（學(xué)識廣博；嚴格要求學(xué)生）
In my opinion，the most important thing for a good teacher is to trust and encourage students，especially those who have difficulties in learning．【高分句型】Anyway，they are expected to help their students learn how to learn well．（我的觀點）

點評 這是一篇圖表給出材料的作文，圖表中給出的材料較為豐富，考生在寫作時，圖表內(nèi)容必須包括在內(nèi)．在自己的觀點部分，考生需要自己適當?shù)陌l(fā)揮，建議考生在平時的英語學(xué)習(xí)中積累一些常用到的重點句型和短語，出彩的發(fā)揮會給文章增色不少．