Question

假設(shè)你是一名記者，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，用英語給China Daily 寫一篇關(guān)于2010年11月15日下午2點(diǎn)30分，上海靜安區(qū)一高樓發(fā)生特大火災(zāi)新聞報(bào)道。字?jǐn)?shù)80個(gè)詞左右。注意：部分內(nèi)容已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Place of fire	between the tenth floor and the twelfth floor.
People in the apartment building	still some retired teachers, be surrounded(v.圍困)，big fire.
Number of the dead and the injured	58,killed, 70 , injured  0ver 50,  missing (adj.失蹤的). by Nov.19th.
Time of stopping the fire	over 4 hours.
Cause of the fire	some careless construction(建筑) workers.
Comment	a big fire in a century in Shanghai.

 
An especially big fire broke out(爆發(fā)) in a 28-storey high-rise apartment building in Jingan District, Shanghai.
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Answer 1

An especially big fire broke out(爆發(fā)) in a 28-storey high-rise apartment building in Jingan District, Shanghai.
At 2:30p.m. On Nov. 15th.,2010, a terrible big fire shook Shanghai and China. It happened between the tenth floor and the twelfth floor in the apartment building. What’s more（ Besides/ Also）, The whole building was trapped (surrounded) in the big fire. There were still some retired teachers staying in it.
By Nov. 19th. the number of people who were killed in the fire had reached 58. As many as 70 people( were injured)injured. Over 50people were missing. Finally（In the end）, It took over 4 hours to control /stop the big fire. The fire was caused by a few careless construction workers .
It is the biggest fire that has ever hit Shanghai in a century.

本題是寫一篇給定要求的書面表達(dá)，寫作的話題為介紹上海火災(zāi)的新聞報(bào)道，內(nèi)容包括大火的時(shí)間，地點(diǎn)，受傷和死亡的人數(shù)，大火持續(xù)的時(shí)間，大火的原因和個(gè)人的評(píng)論等，在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意符合題意，同時(shí)應(yīng)注意語言的準(zhǔn)確性和連貫性。