Question

節(jié)日是我們最喜歡的，節(jié)日期間會(huì)有很多慶�；顒�(dòng)。以My Favorite Festival 為題寫(xiě)一篇60個(gè)詞左右的小短文。
要求：1.字跡工整，請(qǐng)大家不要用涂改液和涂改帶。
2.句子簡(jiǎn)潔明了，意思表達(dá)清楚、準(zhǔn)確。
3.注意句子的連貫性和邏輯性。
4.內(nèi)容包括節(jié)日的時(shí)間、節(jié)日之前的準(zhǔn)備工作、禮儀、飲食、禮物和孩子們的活動(dòng)及表現(xiàn)等。
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Answer 1

My Favorite Festival   
There are many traditional festivals in China,such as Spring Festival， Mid-Autumn Day and so on. My favorite festival is Spring Festival.Spring Festival is the most important traditional holiday in China. It usually lasts for 7 days. Days before the festival,people clean their houses. They think cleaning sweeps any bad luck. They decorate their houses with paper cuts. On the eve of the festival， family members get together and have big meals,including jaiozi. Then they watch the Spring Festival programs on TV. At midnight，they set off fireworks to welcome the new year. During the festival，kids get lucky money from old people. People visit their relatives and friends. They wish each a happy year and good luck.

解析試題分析：試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是介紹自己最喜歡的節(jié)日，要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少.如: such as 例如；and so on 等等；set off 燃放；get ---from從……得到；They think cleaning sweeps any bad luck.他們認(rèn)為大掃除能清除任何霉運(yùn)。they set off fireworks to welcome the new year.他們?nèi)挤艧熁▉?lái)慶祝新年的到來(lái)。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理.
考點(diǎn)：話題作文。