Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

學(xué)校將舉行初中英語征文比賽，主題是介紹你的朋友Nick，請你根據(jù)下列要點完成征文。

1. 勤奮而有耐心，總是樂于助人，經(jīng)常幫同學(xué)輔導(dǎo)數(shù)學(xué)難題。

2. 我7歲時就跟他交上了朋友。

3. 他愿意替我保守秘密，所以我什么都可以告訴他。

4. 他癡迷于自己動手做，他喜歡修壞了的東西。

5. 他媽媽的生日要到了，他決定……

注意：短文須包括所有內(nèi)容要點，要求語句通順、意思連貫；第5 要點的內(nèi)容須用1～2句話作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；詞數(shù)70個左右，短文的開頭和結(jié)尾句已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

My best friend Nick is a lovely boy with a good personality.

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How lucky I am to have such a good friend！

Answer 1

【答案】

My best friend Nick is a lovely boy with a good personality. He is hardworking and patient. He is always ready to help others. He often helps classmates with Maths problems. I made friends with him when I was 7 years old. He is willing to keep secrets for me, so I can tell him everything. He is crazy about DIY. He likes repairing broken things. His mother’s birthday is coming. He decided to make a birthday card for her by himself. His mother is sure to like it.

How lucky I am to have such a good friend！

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文給出了寫作的提綱，在寫作時要構(gòu)思好文章的結(jié)構(gòu)，注意要點一定齊全。句子要完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，注意時態(tài)的變化和主謂一致。文中可適當(dāng)使用一些連接詞來加強(qiáng)文章的邏輯性。

寫作亮點：這篇作文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確流利，要點齊全。文中有一些好的表達(dá)方式如I made friends with him when I was 7 years old. He is willing to keep secrets for me, so I can tell him everything.等等。