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16．今年我國(guó)首次將高考作弊列入刑事處罰，稱(chēng)為史上最嚴(yán)高考．此事引起社會(huì)廣泛關(guān)注．作為一名中學(xué)生，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，就"學(xué)生考試作弊"這一話題，談?wù)勛约旱目捶ǎ?br />

作弊行為	攜帶紙條或電子產(chǎn)品
作弊原因	努力不夠，想考好；…
你的觀點(diǎn)	…

要求：
1．詞數(shù)80-100；開(kāi)頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
2．文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱(chēng)及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分．
3．參考詞匯：exam-room 考室exam-cheating 考試作弊 electronic products 電子產(chǎn)品 micro-earphones 微型耳機(jī) competing environment競(jìng)爭(zhēng)環(huán)境
It's very common for students to cheat in the exams．This year，our country has passed a law that fights against this kind of law-broken behavior．It is reported that
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Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Some students are too lazy to work hard．
句中使用了"too…to…太…而不能…"結(jié)構(gòu)，這句話意為：一些學(xué)生太懶了而不努力學(xué)習(xí)．
高分句型二：
In order to create a fair competing environment，we should say NO to the exam-cheating．
句中使用短語(yǔ)有："in order to do sth  為了做某事"、"say No to…拒絕…"．這句話意為：為了營(yíng)造公平的競(jìng)爭(zhēng)環(huán)境，我們應(yīng)該對(duì)考試作弊說(shuō)不．

解答 It's very common for students to cheat in the exams．This year，our country has passed a law that fights against this kind of law-broken behavior．It's reported that some students carry some important information or notes into the exam-room．Some students copy others'answers．What's more，others use electronic products，such as mobile phones，micro-earphones to pass on the answers．（作弊現(xiàn)象）
There are many reasons for students to cheat in the exam．Some students are too lazy to work hard．【高分句型一】They want to get good grades in order to enter a good high school or a good university．Some students have too much pressure from their parents and teachers．They only want to make them happy．（作弊的原因）
In my opinion，it's dishonest of the students to cheat in the exams，and it's unfair for other students．In order to create a fair competing environment，we should say NO to the exam-cheating．【高分句型二】（我的觀點(diǎn)）

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