Question

現(xiàn)在,人們過上了很好的生活，中學(xué)生們也更加注意自己的衣著。他們對(duì)購(gòu)買衣服有自己的觀點(diǎn)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇文章，可以適當(dāng)進(jìn)行拓展。

一些中學(xué)生的觀點(diǎn)（同意）	平常穿校服，看起來... 學(xué)生應(yīng)該以學(xué)習(xí)為重 能為父母省錢
另一些中學(xué)生的觀點(diǎn)（不同意）	學(xué)生應(yīng)該時(shí)尚的, 流行的 學(xué)生應(yīng)該與眾不同的 校服質(zhì)量(quality)不好，不好看
我的看法	…

要求：1.語(yǔ)句通順,書寫規(guī)范,文章中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名。

      2.文章必須包括所有提示的要點(diǎn),可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

      3.詞數(shù)不少于80詞,文章開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Nowadays, people live a better life. And middle school students are more careful about the way they look.       

                                                                              

                                                                             

                                                                               

                                                                             

                                                                             

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Nowadays, people live a better life. And middle school students are more careful about the way they look.

But in many middle schools, the students have to wear school uniforms. And this rule causes a hot debate among students.

Some students are in favor of the rule. They think the uniforms make the students look more active and energetic. If students can be allowed to wear their own clothes, they may spend more time and energy on choosing clothes. Students should concentrate on studying. Besides, the uniforms are cheap, and they can save money for parents.

On the contrary, there are a lot of students against the rule. First of all, they think uniforms are ugly. But they are young and they have the right to have the popular and fashion clothes. Uniforms make all the students look the same. But everyone should be different from the others. What’s more, the quality of uniforms is not good enough. So they think students should be allowed to choose their own clothes.

【解析】

這是一篇給材料作文。寫作時(shí)，要圍繞中心，理清思緒，不要漏掉重要信息。注意句子的完整性，以及句子之間的銜接，恰當(dāng)?shù)氖褂眠B詞，使行文更流暢。在表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)時(shí)，可使用不同的詞匯進(jìn)行表達(dá)。可適當(dāng)使用一些從句，但注意其準(zhǔn)確性。

【亮點(diǎn)分析】

文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整，充分利用了所給材料，行文流暢。文章中有很多出色的短語(yǔ)和句式，如：have to不得不；in favor of支持；concentrate on專注于；On the contrary相反的；First of all首先；What’s more,除此之外。文中也用了一些連詞，如if, but, so, and等，使文章邏輯思維更強(qiáng)。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。