Question

1．上周日在秦淮河邊發(fā)生了張明救落水小男孩的事情，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖所描述的事情經(jīng)過(guò)，為�？�的英語(yǔ)園地寫(xiě)一篇題為"A Brave Young Man"的英文稿件．

注意：
1）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；
2）語(yǔ)言通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；
3）詞數(shù)80左右，文章的開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
A Brave Young Man
It was a nice day last Sunday．     ．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖畫(huà)作文．內(nèi)容是以"A Brave Young Man"為題根據(jù)圖畫(huà)記述張明救落水小男孩的事情，時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般過(guò)去時(shí)．人稱(chēng)主要為第三人稱(chēng)．
寫(xiě)作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1．描述圖畫(huà)；張明在河邊釣魚(yú)，小男孩突然落水，張明跳入河里，盡力去拉小孩，其他人也來(lái)幫忙，最終小孩獲救．
2．我的感受；
 
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
shout for help 呼喊救命
fall into 掉落
jump into 跳入
learn from sb 向某人學(xué)習(xí)
try one's best to do sth 盡力做某事
【高分句型】
1．He looked around and found①that the little boy was②falling into the water．
①found后是that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句．
②fall into 掉落
2．He ①tried his best to ②pull the boy out of the river．
①try one's best to do sth 盡力做某事
②pull…out of…從…里把…拉出來(lái)
3．People all said Zhang Ming was very brave and helpful．
said后是省略了that 賓語(yǔ)從句．

解答 A Brave Young Man
It was a nice day last Sunday．Zhang Ming was fishing by the Qinhuai River when a little boy went to play nearby．Suddenly，Zhang Ming heard someone shouting for help．He looked around and found that the little boy was falling into the water．【高分句型】It was very dangerous．Zhang Ming jumped into the river immediately．He tried his best to pull the boy out of the river．【高分句型】At that time other people came to offer help．Finally，the boy was saved and he was very grateful．People all said Zhang Ming was very brave and helpful．．（描述圖畫(huà)）【高分句型】We should learn from him．（我的感受）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇圖畫(huà)作文．本文所給圖畫(huà)意思表達(dá)明確，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)．動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真領(lǐng)會(huì)圖畫(huà)內(nèi)涵，概括要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．寫(xiě)作中要注意人稱(chēng)、時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題．同時(shí)注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系．