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3．假定你是你校英語(yǔ)報(bào)的小記者，以下兩幅圖展現(xiàn)了發(fā)生在劉林家的生活場(chǎng)景，請(qǐng)根據(jù)要求寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文投稿．
內(nèi)容要求：
1．簡(jiǎn)要描述兩幅圖的內(nèi)容；
2．概述你對(duì)兩幅圖的理解；
3．說(shuō)明兩幅圖對(duì)你的啟示．

注意：
1．文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；
2．語(yǔ)言通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；
3．詞數(shù)80左右，文章的開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
It happened in Liu Lin's family．It happened in Liu Lin's family．Twenty years ago，when Liu Lin was a child，his mother helped him wash his feet every day．Twenty years later，Liu Lin grew into a young man．Now he helps his mother to wash her feet every day．
What do the pictures tell us？On the one hand，when we were young，our parents devoted themselves to taking care of us．On the other hand，we should always remember what our parents have done for us．When they are growing older，they need our love and care as well．Therefore，it is important for us to pay our parents back after we grow up．
In my family，my parents also give me great love and care every day．I love my parents from the bottom of my heart．Thus，I will learn from Liu Lin to do something for my parents from now on．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容看圖簡(jiǎn)述劉林家的生活場(chǎng)景，談?wù)剬?duì)你的啟示．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)．人稱主要為第三人稱和第一人稱．
寫(xiě)作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1．簡(jiǎn)要描述兩幅圖的內(nèi)容；
2．概述你對(duì)兩幅圖的理解；
3．說(shuō)明兩幅圖對(duì)你的啟示．
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
help sb do sth 幫助某人做某事
on the one hand…，on the other hand…一方面…另一方面…
take care of 照顧
devote oneself to doing sth 致力于…
thus 因此
pay back 報(bào)答
learn from sb向誰(shuí)學(xué)習(xí)．
【高分句型】
1．①On the one hand，②when we were young，our parents ③devoted themselves to ④taking care of us．
①on the one hand…，on the other hand…一方面…另一方面…
②when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句．
③devote oneself to doing sth 致力于…
④take care of sb 照顧某人．
2．①Therefore，②it is important for us to ③pay our parents back ④after we grow up．
①therefore 連詞，因此
②It's+adj+for sb+to do sth對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō)做某事是怎樣的，it是形式主語(yǔ)，動(dòng)詞不定式是真正主語(yǔ)．
③pay back 報(bào)答
④after引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句．

解答 It happened in Liu Lin's family．Twenty years ago，when Liu Lin was a child，his mother helped him wash his feet every day．Twenty years later，Liu Lin grew into a young man．Now he helps his mother to wash her feet every day．（簡(jiǎn)要描述兩幅圖的內(nèi)容）
   What do the pictures tell us？On the one hand，when we were young，our parents devoted themselves to taking care of us．【高分句型】On the other hand，we should always remember what our parents have done for us．When they are growing older，they need our love and care as well．Therefore，it is important for us to pay our parents back after we grow up．【高分句型】（概述你對(duì)兩幅圖的理解）
   In my family，my parents also give me great love and care every day．I love my parents from the bottom of my heart．Thus，I will learn from Liu Lin to do something for my parents from now on．（說(shuō)明兩幅圖對(duì)你的啟示）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇提綱作文．考生在把握了文章的中心后，應(yīng)在內(nèi)心構(gòu)思一個(gè)基本的框架，并考慮使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)和句型，以充分地表達(dá)文章的內(nèi)容．盡可能地充分利用所學(xué)的短語(yǔ)或句型來(lái)表述具體的內(nèi)容，避免使用無(wú)把握或偏、難句型．注意所寫(xiě)句子要符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣