Question

【題目】書面表達（共1題；滿分20分）

請以“我的理想中的學校 ”為題寫一篇80詞左右的短文. 要點如下：

⑴ 每天上午8：00上課，下午4：00結束。有足夠的時間進行課外活動 ，每天只有半小時的作業(yè)。

⑵ 在學校餐廳(dining hall)吃午飯，可以選擇食物吃。

⑶ 老師很幽默，經(jīng)常給我們講笑話。

⑷ 有一個很大的圖書館，里面有許多有用的書，經(jīng)�？梢越钑�看

⑸周末有較多的空閑時間， 可以經(jīng)常進行學校校游。總是玩得很開心。

My Ideal School

Answer 1

【答案】

My Ideal School

My ideal school starts at 8a.m. and finishes at 4p.m. every day. We have enough time for after-school activities. We only have half an hour of homework every day. We have lunch at the school dining hall. We can choose food to eat. Our teachers are very humorous and often tell us funny jokes. There is a big library with a lot of useful books in it. We can borrow books to read. We have lots of free time at the weekend. We can often go on a school trip. We always have a good time.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文給出了寫作的提綱，在寫作時要構思好文章的結構，注意要點一定齊全。句子要完整，表達準確，注意時態(tài)的變化和主謂一致。文中可適當使用一些連接詞來加強文章的邏輯性。

寫作亮點：這篇作文結構清晰完整，表達準確流利，要點齊全。文中有一些好的表達方式如We have enough time for after-school activities. We only have half an hour of homework every day. We have lunch at the school dining hall. We can choose food to eat. Our teachers are very humorous and often tell us funny jokes.等等。