Question

16．最近，你在你們班就"有煩惱向誰說"的話題進行了一項調(diào)查，調(diào)查結(jié)果如下．請你根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇短文描述一下調(diào)查結(jié)果并談?wù)勛约旱目捶ǎ?br />

比例	傾訴對象	理由
60%	同學(xué)，朋友	年齡相仿，容易理解
35%	老師，家長	有耐心，有經(jīng)驗，可以信任
5%	自己解決	不愿與人交流

要求：1．須按上面的提示進行寫作；2.90詞左右，短文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
參考詞匯：信任：believe in，trust 耐心：patience 經(jīng)驗：experience
I'm a student in Grade Nine．I did a survey-"Who would you like to talk with when you are in trouble"in our class．Here are the results．
                                                        

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
①60% students in our class would like to talk with their friends or classmates when they are in trouble．我們班的60%個學(xué)生在遇到麻煩時愿意和他們的朋友或同學(xué)交談．句子中would like to do sth表示想做某事；when在句子中引導(dǎo)一個時間狀語從句．
②I think teenagers need to have a good communication with others，especially when we are in trouble．我認為青少年與他人需要有一個良好的溝通，尤其是當我們有麻煩的時候．句子中think后面跟的是一個賓語從句；need to do sth表示需要做某事．

解答 I'm a student in Grade Nine．I did a survey-"Who would you like to talk with when you are in trouble"in our class．Here are the results．（引出話題）
   Different students have different answers to this question.60% students in our class would like to talk with their friends or classmates when they are in trouble（高分句型）．Because they think they are about the same age and it's easy for them to understand one another.35% students would like to talk with their parents or teachers when they meet problems．Because they think they are patient，experienced and can be trusted．Only 5% students choose to deal with the problems by themselves，because they are unwilling to share their ideas with others．（調(diào)查的結(jié)果及出現(xiàn)這種情況的原因）
   I think teenagers need to have a good communication with others，especially when we are in trouble．（高分句型）We should ask others for advice when we can't make a decision by ourselves．Anyway，two heads are better than one．（我的觀點）

點評 本文是關(guān)于最近你校組織了"有煩惱向誰說"的調(diào)查活動．請用英語描述相關(guān)的調(diào)查情況．調(diào)查的結(jié)果以表格形式列出來了，有三種原因，要一一表達清楚，要有自己的觀點要學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮．要注意用詞如of the same age"同齡的"；educational experience．教育經(jīng)驗，等．同時要用合適的連接詞如However，和also連接具體的要點．在發(fā)表個人觀點的時候盡量使用英語地道的表達．